|Reviews for Five Great Charters|
| Valentine's Riddle 5/4/08 . chapter 48
As always, a fantastic chapter! I especially loved your description of court- it really reminded me of the scenes in Lirael where Ellimere is describing how Hestia tripped over her sleeve and catapulted into Jall Oren _
Great job, as usual, and I can't wait until the next chapter!
| Vanilla Bean CEO 5/4/08 . chapter 48
Aw. only two more chapters?
I really like Zavebe. She has...a different personality I suppose. I also really like Andromis...good on him for choosing someone outside the norm. Though I am not sure that the Royal Kitchen was the place to declare this.
Update soon (but then again not too soon cause then it will be over)
Vanilla Bean CEO
| ab sab 5/3/08 . chapter 48
Oh dear, what will the Kingdom do now that Lady Zavebe is here? She's a most interesting character, and I'm looking forward to reading more about her in the next two chapters.
And Felio! I must say, I never thought we'd hear from him again. Lovely to know he's still around!
A fantastic chapter, and much, much better late than never.
| magewhisper705 4/25/08 . chapter 47
Wow, this story is AMAZING! I love the plot and all of the characters. Please, please, please write more! I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Nimbus Llewellyn 4/17/08 . chapter 47
I shall be very harsh... THIS IS FANTASTIC! It is so good, words fail me!
I hate to say it but more please, in your own time though, if you're going for medical school you must be very busy.
I'm particularly enjoying Mogget vs. Kibeth. :)
(Rainstorm Amaya Arianrhod recommended this to me.)
| Cesy 4/1/08 . chapter 43
Doesn't the eighth gate and ninth precinct get described in Lirael? It's what's beyond the ninth gate that no-one knows.
| Kirdane 3/28/08 . chapter 47
Sorry about the complete lack of reviews lately! have been swamped with uni work! loved the last three chapters, ive missed reading it! the last one really made me chuckle, with farelle. Can't believe theres only going to be 3 more :( xx
| Cesy 3/25/08 . chapter 37
"He and discovered that weapons quenched in the water were nearly indestructible." Is this a typo?
Also, in Chapter 38, "The ten of them were clustered at one end of the table with the King like and exclusive club, and the divide between them and the twelve nobles was so obvious it was almost painful." - "like an exclusive club" looks like another typo.
| Cesy 3/24/08 . chapter 33
Where did you find the extra info about Garth Nix planning to write new Old Kingdom books? I couldn't find it on his website.
| Cesy 3/24/08 . chapter 32
Oh, that ending is so cute.
| Cesy 3/24/08 . chapter 23
Surely if Penemue is included, all of the Royal family will have Clayr blood/Mosrael's spirit from then onwards, so the Royal family will have a double dose? Except Penemue's current children, of course.
| Cesy 3/24/08 . chapter 22
Why not add the scene you described in your author's note at the end, if you've already written it?
| Cesy 3/24/08 . chapter 18
"Abhorsen had stipulated that someone else had come along and finished him off": Is this what you mean? Normally a stipulation is a condition imposed on someone rather than a comment or deduction or suggestion.
| Cesy 3/24/08 . chapter 17
"It hadn’t really been that good of a speech." would normally be "It hadn’t really been that good a speech." over here.
| Cesy 3/23/08 . chapter 15
Doesn't it say in Abhorsen that any charter mage of the Royal Blood can create or repair charter stones?