Omg. That was so beautiful.

Uh... Sora would probably have trouble thinking so in-depth.

But anyway, this is cool. The next one has to be about Roxas or something, or maybe about Xigbar shooting Zexion in the face and Zexion can't defend himself because Nomura wants to keep his weapon a secret that only he knows.

Whew.

Very descriptive and interesting. It's just I could feel the Slash and I couldn't accept it. God, has the KH fandom been consumed by Sora/Riku, but to each his own, I guess.

Riku's been through a lot, having developed quite a bit over the course of the series. His character's intriguing. You portrayed him well.

~@_@~

. . .

that was beautiful.

wow.

simply beautiful.

This is an interesting little story, and a unique perspective to put Sora at. Nicely done!

Also, for the title, the word you're looking for is 'le crépuscule' ^_^

AUGH ANGST D: beautifully written :3

That was beautiful. Lovely imagery and eloquent phrasing.

wow...I am in awe of your description powress...Thank you so much for this delicious treat!