Hilarious.
I really enjoyed how you just continue to write making it obvious of how in denial Shikamaru was in without ever making him say a word. I fell in love with Chouji's last line!
Keep on writing and I'll keep on reviewing!

Ahh, Chouji, how hard it must be to have a genius for a best friend! xDD Rather you than me though! Sorry Chouji!

LOL! Funyy story! Of course he wasn't staring.

ur thank-you gift:
2 cakes
3 pies - 1 cherry, 1 peach, 1 apple
18 cookies - 9 peanut butter, 9 chocolate-chip
a friggin' sparkling kitten! :3
yes, that's how good u r!
i wish i could write like you...(sob) :(

That was kinda good. ^^ Even if I wasn't looking for it but a bit of fluff. But still. Good.

“Okay, ew. Now you’re drooling.” Oh, Chouji. Slightly pervy!Shika is cute. XD

Lol a bit too short but cute

ROFL! Chouji-- hahaha! "Okay, ew. Now you're drooling." LOOLS! That was great. I think it was written really well. Congrats!

hahaha, gotta love choji. very in character! i wish it was a series of drabbles!

Oh god XD
This is the best XD!

I like it :) My favourite line is “Okay, ew. Now you’re drooling.” Good job!

i love all your shikaino stuff!

Ha ha ha ha ha! That was so funny at the end. :"Okay, ew. Now you're drooling! HA! Oh man, that was teh **!

Shika is a dirty pedo...

Hilarious! I loved it. :)