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DarkButterflys 2007-05-13 . chapter 13
Loved the cranny interaction. Can wait for the next chapter!
december morning 2007-03-30 . chapter 13
I haven't read this story in a while, but I just caught up. Still enjoying, despite not being a Cranny fan. Great job. :)
Amac xx 2007-03-03 . chapter 12
I have to say, I absolutely love this fic. Im suprised you don't have many, MANY more reviews. It's written well, and I could see this happening. It's panning out great, and I can't wait until you update.
DarkButterflys 2007-03-03 . chapter 12
Loved this chapter!
Flower J. Dean 2007-02-09 . chapter 11
well,
this truly is amazing.
and well written. bravo.
i cant wait to read more.
Kuddls 2007-01-02 . chapter 11
Wow, I haven't read this in a long time. It was really nice to read a good fanfic
DarkButterflys 2006-12-30 . chapter 11
Best chapter so far! I really hope Craig goes after Manny.
DarkButterflys 2006-12-28 . chapter 10
Love it, update soon!!
marshallsaredead 2006-10-15 . chapter 9
wow this is good. post more soon
DarkButterflys 2006-10-06 . chapter 9
Can't wait for a cranny chapter. Update soon!
DarkButterflys 2006-08-29 . chapter 8
Great chapter, update soon!
december morning 2006-08-29 . chapter 8
Great chapter. I hope you update soon! This story is very creative and different. I like it a lot. :)
Kuddls 2006-08-08 . chapter 7
A very interesting story. I wonder how it'll all turn out.
DarkButterflys 2006-07-24 . chapter 7
Great chapter!
Kuddls 2006-06-29 . chapter 6
This is very well written, but there are a few mistakes.
You used the wrong 'your' in the previous chapter, and didn't insert the ' in the word 'we're'. However, I'm sure these are just mistakes you over looked.
Also, when someone shakes their head, they'd be saying no, when someone nods their head, they're saying yes.
For example: Craig nodded his head in agreement.
These are mistakes from last chapter, but I can't recall any mistakes from this chapter.
They were both very good and I hope you update soon.
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