good,and quite weird. it left me a bit confused, but still, quite good.

very nice!

i totally loved it!
u are like, one of the best writers. maybe, when i post storys on this, i will follow u !

it could use a little more romance, but other than that perfect!!

continue the good work!

Cute! Very cute indeed!

I love the McGee/Abby pairing! What a cute story. Now don't you dare not write a sequal! I want to know what happens "next time" *girlish giggle*

Oh... Interesting. Will there be a next time? =D

two words (i think)
MORE CHAPTERS!
sorry for shouting:)

Sequal!

Hey, nice chap, really nice, keep it comming ;)

Very cute. I love McAbby. You should write a sequel about the next time. Great story. ;)

Are you gonna write 'next time'? because this really begs for a sequel..

Could I possibly love you any more? First, you go and write the most awesome N/L fanfics ever, and now you come and write some in NCIS?

You are my hero.