Very sweet. I've always imagined Tonks to be... less lusty, though. Great job :)

aw...how sweet...jeanS

Aww, so sweet.

I liked this a lot. Very well written and worded quite well. Congratulations.

Aww! I don't even know what to say! That was so sweet :)

Very sweet, i liked your style of writing. Keep it up!

Madusa's Daughter

Ha...that slightly reminded me of the coldplay song Sparks...because "I saw Sparks" I'm a nerd. It was great! Tonks/Lupin is AWESOME! You're a great writter person...which is why I talk to you...:D I really liked this story...made me feel Twiterpated.

This was a really rad story. I liked it! Please continue to write more stories like this, because I assume this story is a one shot. ^_^

Cheers,
DD

Aww, that was really cute.