*wails* Why?! Why?! Oh my goodness, that was excellent! It almost suffering, what was written, and the pacing it took to get there. Very well-written and very touching.

I really like this story. Your characterization of Percy is wonderful. Really a very good job!

Aww *sniff* That was so sad. Why? FIEND! I think I'll go sob or something.

It was really well written and whatnot...I think there was one typo, where you wrote "what" instead of "why" or something of that sort.

*sniff* Poor stupid Percy...*pats his head*

That was...That was...I don't know what that was...It was perfect,perfect I say!I...I...Absolutley beautiful...Stunning,even...
~~Sirius LIVES~~