 olive-girl-92 2006-08-16 . chapter 8OMG!! THAT WAS SO SOO SOO AMAZINGLY GOOD! SENSATIONAL
i especially loved the bit where tony and michelle had that big fight. please keep writing more stories. you're such an excellant writer!
olivia :-) |
 bookworm03 2006-06-26 . chapter 8I thought this was a very fitting conclusion to the entire story. You seemed to resolve their dispute in a way that shows they understand each other's position, but at the same time have differeing opinions. I especially liked that you didn't overdue the fluff since this particular story didn't really merit it in the first place. The ending was just enough to leave the reader feeling satisfied. Nice work :). |
 modernxxmyth 2006-06-26 . chapter 8Very nice ending. Fluffy, without being overly-fluffed. It's angsty fluff. If that makes any sense at all. Anyway, I've greatly enjoyed this. Nice work! |
 saturn567 2006-06-25 . chapter 8realy liked this fic! awesome how they talked it all out and Michelle got some action in the field. Great descriptions of their emotions, and how Michelle put up a brave front, despite everything she went through. Goodness forbid it, but if I was in a situation like hers, I would want to surprise everyone with my strength. |
 tm24 2006-06-25 . chapter 8Really beautiful final chapter! I really enjoyed this story... each individual chapter and as a whole. The idea was great and you kept the story interesting. Your writing is great. I really hope to read another one of your stories soon. :) |
 bookworm03 2006-06-21 . chapter 7Very sweet chapter. You really stregthened the bond between T/M by having them discuss what happened. The fact that they both have been put in similar situations allows them to help each other deal with it and you really captured it in this chapter.
Nice work. :) |
 MichelleBA 2006-06-21 . chapter 7Can't wait for the next chapter and the fluff to come! |
 Lady Beatle 2006-06-19 . chapter 7i luv how u ended it because it makes u feel all happy and that everything is going to move on and be all right. i think u portrayed t and m really well in this chapter because u made people realize how t/m/j feel,well maybe not j as much, but when they torture/kill/etc. |
 saturn567 2006-06-19 . chapter 7amazing action and great fluff to add to the mix! |
 i-luv-24 2006-06-19 . chapter 7aww how lovely, i like it wen tonys all protective! |
 modernxxmyth 2006-06-18 . chapter 7Aw, beautifully written. Wonderful job! |
 chezlovesyou 2006-06-18 . chapter 7aw, my heart totally went out to michelle while she recounted her story to tony! i LOVE them together, so cute, they just fit together!
"And so, with Tony’s comforting, encouraging presence, Michelle had learned to admit that she wasn’t always fine. While she was far from admitting it all or even most of the time, she had reached the point where she knew she could, and that when she truly needed to, she did."
love that line! |
 bookworm03 2006-06-13 . chapter 6Very sweet chapter. I love how you resolved the conflict between them. It was a great way of rounding off the entire storyline of Michelle in the field. As usual, wonderful work. Can't wait for an update. |
 modernxxmyth 2006-06-13 . chapter 6I want to marry your fanfic. No doubt about it. I love your writing style with this pairing. It's not all that insane pure fluff. You have angst and action. And it's brilliant. And I absolutely cannot wait for the upcoming conversation. It's going to...brilliant. Or are you going to write it? Please write it. Please, please, please, please, please. I like NEED to read it. Or I'll...die. I exaggerate a lot. But seriously. PLEASE! Ahem. Anyway...uh, brilliant chapter. |
 i-luv-24 2006-06-13 . chapter 6yay their friends again, lol, very good, would like fluff tho or is this just action? |