wowowowowowowowowowowowowow! Keep writing!

it's getting better and better can't wait for a update

Very good so far can't wait for the next one

Excellent chapter! Keep it up!

write more and I love love love the story I wish some of yours and courts writing genes had wiped off on me

Wow you have to update soon.

Creepy but good^^, love it, you write awesome, keep on!

Nice story hope to see more of it

Harry's reactions were well done in theis chapter. With each chapter, they get better. I especially enjoyed from the hug on. That was a great idea and the reactions from then on were... intense. The ending was very effective.
Keep working.

Interesting - Update soon!

update soon.

Definitely keep going. You’ve got a good start. In this second chapter, I felt Harry’s desperation at lacking memories more so than in the first. That said, I definitely think that you can push it further. In addition to diction, you can also use things such as sentence structure (length, punctuation) to create this effect.
Chapter 2 definitely showed improvement. Your word choice varied more as did the length and the way you started each sentence. I also like Harry’s flashes. They’re interesting. I’m left wondering which image will appear next. Keep working hard.

alright!! another another!!

poor harry, ron and herms.

Good start. Keep writing.