...Wo0w...

I like your writing style and attention to detail.
Hoping to see more some day.

Holy crap. This is so good. I can't wait till chapter 6.

hm... the part with tai's dad was very interesting. could this foreshadow problems to come? hm... and then there was sora lol Neways, very good, keep going. Yeah YAMACHI!!

this is getting more and more interesting... keep up the good work! :)

Your short chapters torture me, but then I wouldn't want to have to wait longer for updates... anyway, good story, sorry I don't have any constructive criticism today.

great story. hope to read more from you soon. i liked this chapter a lot. bye

Ahh, I'm so excited! I want to find out why Taichi doesn't wall to really love someone! Poor Yamato! But poor Taichi too - Yamato got all uber-protective and jealous over nothing and confused him!

I think you might have a taisuke/daito subplot planned, cuz it seems like Dais likes Taichi, and that would be cool because then we'd REALLY get to see Yamato in I-WILL-KILL-ALL-THOSE-WHO-TOUCH-MY-TAICHI mode (Iwkatwhotomtamon!). I love that Taichi's the uke - not enough Yamachi to satisfy me round here. Update soon!

Interesting...very interesting. Tacihi is such a baka! Poor Yamato...

o i'm so loving the yamachi :) jus wish they wd stop getting interupted!

Oh. My. Gackt. THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!...anyway loved it!

continue please, I want to see where this story is going to go.

Ah uke Taichi! I'm so in love with this fic! and a yamato/taichi/daisuke triangle it seems! omg please update faster please please please!

yay good yummy chapter. like the yamachi part, any other yaoi couple no. well hope to read more from you soon. l8r

Awesome!
Update soon!