This is pretty good i like. I also like writting songs and stuff. I hope to see more. Happy writting:)

That went so well with a devotional i read today...(which said "Life is a glorious opportunity if it is used to condition us for eternity")

OK, can i just ask - WHAT IS WITH THE AGE RATING SCALE AT THE BEGINNING OF CHAPTER 1? i don't think that we actually need to know that, and if the poem is crap, why put it up?

Keep going though, looks like a promising start.

Fishy-Bubbles

Seems kinda sad, but it's still pretty good. =D

Kinda repetitive, but it gets the point across. =D

Again, more inspiring stuff. Keep it up. =D

All I can say is "Wow." That's it. There's nothing else coming to mind. Good job.

Wow, you write some amazingly true poems. Thanks for sharing them. =D

They're all super-true, and this one's no exception. You're awesome. ^-^

Again, another song reminder. "God's so good, He's so good to me."
Hooray for poems about God. =D

-can only nod- Wow. True. Good job, again.

Yeah, one-sidedness doens't work so well. It's gotta be a two-way connection. Good job. =D

Ohio? Nuh-uh.
No, kidding. Ohio does seem like it'd be pretty cool.
Anyway, another pretty good poem/song. Kinda sad, but also pretty true for a lot of people.

Again, extremely true.
"I'm a loser, I'm a winner. I'm a saint and I'm a sinner"--Jessica Andrews' Who I Am.

Wow, does that remind me of a video we watched at Bible Camp. The speaker (Louie GiGlio) talked about how big the universe is and how much God cares for us and...yeah. It was really amazing. Indescribable, really (name of the video, a song, and also very true).