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| abregaza 2003-03-29 ch 14, anon. | abuseReally enjoyed this, especially the ending where Logan sets up a way for them to contact each other. |
| JD 2001-06-30 ch 14, anon. | abuse*tackle huggles, clings and ducttapes...that sorta thing >.>* Thank you! thank you! thank you! A finished 2nd season story! I've been all over the place trying to soothe my craving for possible DA 2nd season stuff. And Woo, you've helped alot. I love this fanfic, you did a wonferful job, keep it up! ^_^ |
| BlueMoonRain 2001-06-13 ch 14,  | abuseKudos to you for writing a kick-** story. I really enjoyed reading it--especially Zane with his toy tank. |
| Lady Callie 2001-06-07 ch 13, | abuseYES!! THEY MADE IT! YEAHWAHAAA! Thank you so much for this kick ** story! I was screaming and laughing the whole way through. Zane in a tank, good lord! LOL! Great work! I look forward to the last chapter! :D -LadyCallie |
| insane 2001-06-07 ch 14, | abuseIt was great....i mean...."great" doesn't do it justice....but it was...and more...I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. |
| Jazzy24 2001-06-07 ch 14, | abuseGreat ending! I do hope that you make a sequel, I bet it'd be great! Keep writing, you're a good author! |
| Queen Gwenyvere 2001-06-07 ch 14, | abuseNice series...I hope this is how S2 begins...you don't have pull with the writers, do you? :) |
| Aquila1 2001-06-07 ch 14, | abuseThat was fun. You thought this out well and there are a lot of directions things could go in the future. I noticed a few more spelling mistakes than usual in the last two chapters, but it's likely due to getting them out so quickly. All in all a great entertaining story. Keep it up. |
| Zanna 2001-06-07 ch 14, anon. | abuseAhhhhhh....that was just great! Where should I start with the praise? First, your action scenes are taut, fast paced and riveting. Second, you have a way snappy dialogue that just brings a grin to my face, and sometimes an outright guffaw. Third, your characters practically leap off the screen. I mean, you completely made up Warren and all of Zane that we know of from the show is that he mechanic who owns a dog. You made both of them come to life. I loved that scene where Zane found out how much it would cost to keep 'Burtrum' in fuel. It's a good thing I've got this story listed among my favourites because I'm going to come back and read it again...and again...and again... |
| Aquila1 2001-06-06 ch 12, | abuseGet going on that next part! You have me hanging by a thread. Great job with the suspense. |
| Aquila1 2001-06-06 ch 9, | abuseThis is truly entertaining and increasingly complicated. I like it. I'm wracking my brains, trying to remember who Philip is, but I'm very interested in seeing where this goes from here. Generally very good writing. Keep it up. |
| cheetahluke 2001-06-06 ch 12, anon. | abuseHEY!!.. dont leave it there.. keep going.. KEEP GOING!!! i want more.. NOW.. good work.. hope you post the rest tonight!! |
| insane 2001-06-06 ch 11, | abusei love it....i mean...its great...not too fast...not to slow....but just right.... |
| MB 2001-06-06 ch 11, anon. | abuseArrrgghh! Need a new chapter please, with sugar on top??? I hate cliffhangers, not that this is one, but I want Max out!!! I love it so far, keep writing. |
| Zanna 2001-06-05 ch 11, anon. | abuseOh oh oh! I'm just having way too much fun reading this. You have a way with repartee. More chapters, pleeeeeeze! |