Excellent start. Please give us more chapters.

Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.

Best,
~JohnnyG

I really ike the way this is going, with Nodoka not knowing about the curse, of course she should be upset at Akane for striking Ranko/Ranma. Too bad that no one else in the house was able to fess up to the deception, will be interesting to see what happens when the other people in Nerima show up, and how Nodoka handles them, as well as what'll happen when Rayne might finally show up.

it is a good story to read and ranma's mom gets to see how akane really acts towards people.

im liking what i see so far, but i really need more. i dont really mind the short chapters, but if theyre gonna be this short they should probably be a little more frequent. anyways, keep it coming. ^^

Short. Annoyingly short with little in the way of plot developement. I still like the overall premise (or at least I think I do, given what little I have to work with) but I can hardly call what is little more than plot transition worthy of its own chapter.

I'll be back when you have something more substantial :)

Almost thought Ranma would be revealed. Looking good, and looking for more.

Hm. I'll keep an eye on this. Don't know much about Bloodrayne to know where the cross over will go

Excellent second chapter, if only a bit short for my likes (but than again I like epics so its no real fault of the authors!)

I hope the NWC will continue to be involved in the story.

I look forward to seeing how Ranma will reveal who Ranko is to his mother and hope it is a well thought out chapter! Few do the moment justice I have found.

Thanks for writing!!

Please, Mum, can I have some more? lololol

I'd be willing to ead another chapter of this. Something about redheaded vampire sisters has a certain appeal to it. Hope for something longer-more developed in the near future.

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I have never personally played Blood Rayne, but I think you have described enough to get the basic concept. So far this has been fairly interesting, Ranma hitting the pool of drowned dhampir. Can't wait to see what happens next.

brindani

oh the joys of bursting Akane's bubble world. Hehehe, so far not bad, i hope to see you continue this.

I'm not too familiar with Blood Rayne but I am quite happy to see a new type of crossover fan fictions. If and when you continue this I will be looking forward to reading it. Other than that I have nothing more to add to help with the story at the moment.

Not familiar with the x-over - but still a nicely done chapter.