If you squint? That was loaded up with puppyshipping goodness.
Mutts are awesome.
Your story was awesome!

i like it

Ohh... I liked that. Good work.

you cold easily make this into a story if you wanted
it was good i enjoyed it no matter how short it was.

I love this chapter.It is really good.Hope you write more.Well got to go ok bye.

Mizu ^_^

kawaii ^^ i adore the JoeySeto pairing ^^

one word. awsome

cant wait for the next chapter!

I really liked this story.

Cute.

Kind of clichéd for this pairing (Seto rescuing Joey). There were enjoyable parts such as parts where I thought "that'd never happen".
Seto's comment on liking mutts instead of purebreads was sort of original, and I liked that.
However, I can't really see Joey sharing information with Seto that his father abuses him, and calls him names. He assumes Seto to be the enemy, and not even Joey is so stupid to reveal this information to him. He doesn't want pity, and not from Seto. He'd be more likely to say "** off, moneybags" or something like that when Seto decided to butt into his business.

For future works, I suggest you think over your characterisation. That, and good grammar (which you seem to have) are the basis of a good story.

I liked that. It was combination of cute and sweet. I liked how Joey was defenseless and Seto helped him. I loved the line when Seto said I happen to like mutts, not as stuck up as purebreds.
Also I liked it when Joey said Don't Call me that. I get enough of it from my dad as is. It added more drama in the story.
You should write a sequel to tell what happens next. ME LIKEY THE SHORT FIC. :D