'Lady Ginny Molly Weasley Potter'? WTF? Since when was Ginny royalty? MALFOY killed Voldemort?! He could barely kill Dumbledore! His father is a death eater, why would Draco of all people want to kill Lord Voldemort? wouldn't harry want to kill the Dark Lord?

Anyways, there are alot of spelling/grammar/format mistakes, which can be easily fixed. Secondly, this is not a tragedy! You should elaborate on how everybody died, instead of Ginny just say she supposedly has seen everybody die. How did she and Harry get married? Did she actually try to save Harry and everybody? Elaborate on her 'sadness'. Wouldn't she at least TRY and get over it? The poem you wrote, sorry to say, is not that good. Put in something meaningful, instead of saying that Ginny is saying goodbye to random things.

The most important thing: WORK ON A BETTER PLOT!

From,
NickyFox13

P.s I do not intend to be mean. Please don't take this critism to hard. Also, unicef does NOT exist in the magical world

*sob* so sad

Great story! Though there were a couple spelling/grammar errors. I don't approve of the suicide though. Harry would have had Ginny live and so would her family and friends. Anyway, this is good.

Not very good. You might want to invest in a beta reader who'd find some of the mistakes you've made. The format - all centered - is also aggravating to read. Good luck on your next try.

It is Complete and Utter Crap.

No seriously, It sucks. Why? The length. I know it is a one shot, and a sad but ** one at that but how about some more details? How does Malfoy kill Harry? How does Ron and Draco die? How does ginslut and Harry become a couple? It's so short it is worthless and a piece of **.

I read your review to my story. Recognise this: "It is Complete and Utter Crap." Next time when you give a negative review at least state some reasons you steaming pile of **! You are worthless, and your stories aren't **. 600 words? What the **?! If you are going to write at least write a proper chapter. Its not that hard. Take a writing course and read a book. Hell, maybe you should get an imagination.

"Lady Ginerva..." WTF? Is it some hopeless and pitiful attempt at tragedy? Well I shed tears. Lots of it for your incompitence and your inept attempt at writing something worth reading.

Short and sweet, in a sad way. meaning it's a very good story, or poem and it made me sad. What happened to Hermione's kid, did he die too? Sorry that little bit confuses me.

Very good story, good job. (=^.^=)

It was good. But depressing *sob*

Awesome Story.

Bye
-May