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Adran06 2007-07-04 . chapter 8
Well, that was lots of fun getting caught up. Now I have a very tough choice. Your last story is on hiatus. My options consist of not reading it at all, so I'm not tormented with a potential cliffhanger, or reading it anyway and suffering for it. The summary itself is enough to tempt me. But the hiatus is enough to discourage me too. It's really a tough choice. I can always hope you get back to writing it some day, but my hopes aren't too high. Its still a horrible thing for an author to lose their passion with a story they are working on. It makes the story feel sad, and then later it can come back to haunt them as it turns their life into a parody and torments them as Elegy and Nocturne, with assistance from Fiona, make their reality really weird for not finishing it. And yes I am weird, and proud of it! You are a great author, and I just wish you hadn't lost interest in the story. Though I can understand that it happens. It happened when I tried to write my own story. Looking back on it now, if I was to actually try rewriting it, I probably would make an effort to improve the quality GREATLY, since I now can admit it kinda sucked, but I digress, this is a review of your story and not my failed attempt at one. Your characters, while odd, have become endeared to me. I will miss them. It was lots of fun reading your stories, and the parodies were endless entertainment. Danny has had lots of stuff happen to him, from being turned into a girl to being tormented by a psychotic psychic to meeting his new future self, along with his son and daughter. We can only hope, some day, this universe might return to us, but till then we must cherish what we have. You have done a wonderful job, and we all appreciate it. Hopefully you also got the review I sent you that had a link to a website that you could see every episode of Danny Phantom from Season 3, but just in case I'll include the site again.

w . livevideo . com

Thats it. Just use wikipedia to get a list of episode names to search for. Perhaps seeing what happens to them all will lead to some inspiration to help finish the story. The last 2 episodes are especially good, both easily capable of being called the best episodes of all DP IMHO. Here's to hoping you will eventually get the inspiration you need to finish your wonderful series, and all that stuff. Keep up the awesome job!

TTYL,
Adran
Adran06 2007-07-04 . chapter 3
Well, now I'm suspecting alot of things about your stories. I'm very curious who Andy and Lucy's mom is. There are only 2 real possibilities, and I'm currently hoping its Sam, but I have a sinking suspicion it isn't. I have no problem with it being someone besides Sam, I'm just a stickler for the official couple. Reguardless of who the official couple of this story is, you definitely do good parodies, even if this is weird as all heck. Danny is going to be laughing about this for YEARS I'm sure. I wouldn't be surprised if Clockwork had a hand in this somewhere too, maybe not directly, but a little subtle guiding is always something he could do from time to time. Keep up the awesome job.

TTYL,
Adran
Adran06 2007-07-04 . chapter 2
Danny apparently is used to his universe getting turned on its head. I guess I would be too if MY reality got screwed with as much as his is. That sounds like endless entertainment to me. I'd be the best day ever for blackmail. I'd just make sure I had plenty of DVD-R's to record everything I needed so I could blackmail those I needed to so I could have a few perfect school days. That is, assuming that the video recorded their weirdness and wasn't screwed over once reality reset itself to normal.

TTYL,
Adran
mickomoo 2007-01-03 . chapter 8
Weird but funny. Every series needs randomness once in awhile...
i AM the Random Idiot 2006-05-18 . chapter 8
Haha, aww, Fiona would be adorable as a dog. I'd keep her! And then she could be my Secretary of State of Random Insanity. (see Ch. 4 review)

Good story! And good luck finding a title for your next fic.
darkflame1516 2006-05-18 . chapter 8
YAY! i dont mind giving "positive feedback" (or ego stroking), as long as it keeps u writing more fics!! and u better think of a title quick, i cant wait much longer for that fic!!

plus i just found out that the new DP movie "Reality Trip" (formerly School Spirit) is coming out June 9th! i cant wait for that either!!

post the next fic soon, this one was great...and funny!! and YAY that means Fiona will be back, whoo!
WingsOfMorphius 2006-05-18 . chapter 8
:D :D :D Dash is gonna murder him if he finds out Danny did that... 'lol' Can't wait for the next installment!
The Sleep Warrior 2006-05-18 . chapter 8
Ah, the yearbook...that one's going to be the best one! Hehe. Keep up the great work, I love it!
i AM the Random Idiot 2006-05-17 . chapter 7
That was cute! Heh, Ghost Writer and the potted daisy...
WingsOfMorphius 2006-05-17 . chapter 7
'giggling' Aw... That was kinda sweet in a wierd, twisted kind of way...
The Sleep Warrior 2006-05-17 . chapter 7
Hah, the potted daisy...:D I loved the descriptions once agian, you really pulled me into the plot. Great job! Keep up the awesome work, you never cease to amaze me.
darkflame1516 2006-05-17 . chapter 7
hm...liked the rhyming thing, the "not you too"...priceless...but no fighting...hm...that is a kinda lame ending...but Lament did seem like something done just to amuse Danny...hm...more hm's...i cant wait to see what spectacular surprise awaits during #20 after this VERY FUNNY story...so pleasie hurry up!! Cheerio!
i AM the Random Idiot 2006-05-16 . chapter 6
This was an interesting insight into what makes you tick as an author. It amazes me. I myself have a sort of "happy place" where I keep all my plot bunnies and random tidbits for writing... Cool!

Update!
WingsOfMorphius 2006-05-16 . chapter 6
I hope Danny gives those plot bunnies a good beating for me. They've been giving me hell lately...
The Sleep Warrior 2006-05-15 . chapter 6
:D I liked it, though. It was really fitting. It's a lot like my head: full of random stories and ideas, most of which will never quite see the light of day...Ah well. Maybe my original world will make it out someday. Anywho, you really did an awesome job with this one! The descriptions rocked, and the storyline itself was unmatched. Keep up the awesome work!
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