OK, that was a little strange. Cute and a little sad, but weird.

Very good writing. Good job.

awe. some.

that's about it.

Real nice, especially the use of vocabulary. =) Especially during Jimmy's thoughts... XD But something about the story disturbed me for some reason... but only a bit.

I like how you wrote what would happen in both situations, though at first it confused me.

I didn't play KH, so I wouldn't know. XD

Keep it up! =)

Great conceptual storyline, but it was kind of predictable... I fel some parts of it were kind of cliche. Overall, I loved it and the whole story was authentic, expecially the interactions between the characters and what was going on inside Jimmy's (oversize) head

Wow, you're good.
And you use such... Big words.
I understood most of it, but some.. I'm totally in the dark.
Good job.

Good story! Good showing of the alternate universes.

Very intriguing. I really liked it.

Mystic

an excellent and slightly Haunting summary of the fears that have arisen on the forums of but great story :D

~kle

other than the fact that this SCREAMS kingdom hearts (which in itself is not bad), i loved it! the take on what could have been was excellent (though the love trait thing is a bit odd but well-established).

"There are many worlds, but only one sky."
I love that line especially. Great story!

Brilliantly written- as usual! You must have been there for the discussion about this, huh?

I liked it alot!

Wow, excellent work. Loved the story.

Very good fic, with a really interesting plot. Certainly, the doubt about their feelings being result of a scientific mess makes Jimmy's decision understandable, but, as "our universe" Jimmy discovered, he and Cindy had feelings for each other for a long time before the brain-switching accident, so maybe this just accelerated the process.

Keep the good writing.

excellent story it sounds so sciency with the whole other worlds thing... please continue writing!! :)