you should continuing writing this story...i really like it...your doing a great job...keep up the good work

i KNOW you wrote this a long time ago, and i KNOW you've got on your profile that you've lost interest on many of your stories on here, but please please please update this one :( i cried reading this, your anamazing writer :)

OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!

Xela: Shut up!Shut up!Shut up!Shut up!

Avan: Ugh, nothing else to say.

Hi there! I dont know if your still adding on to this story, but i think that its great! I totally love the way that you left it hanging lol. I hope that you keep on adding to it because I'll be looking!

PLEASE! Give us the rest of this story. Stories like these will tell me even more stories. The phrase- "Stories will give you more than its said" -really knows what it was talking about! Amazing,Beautiful,Well-written,10/10,Truly Wonderful from start to finish! It made laugh,cry,wonder,imagine,worry,shocked,happy,and...(breathing heavily) a-and,other emotions that we carry. Cont. the story and you'll be able to be always be people's #1 writer. If FFN had a "Congratulations to _! For making an awesome story for readers!" on this community (and for other communities out there) then your name will be on it! Newer readers will see this and will beg for your stories! Please, cont. and thank you!

where me suppose to go to see more ah >

please update this story T_T

please continue this asap! i loved it...great story! keep updating :D

please don't say you've finished on this story!

the first one was sad and this one needs to be complete or it'd be... sadder!

please update soon^^

oh my freakin god please update i cant stand it! i cried when i read silver haired savior and i creid for this. you're an amazing writer. so...PLEASE UPDATE!

huh? nu nonononononono they.. he... ah... -sobbing on the keybored- really good writing, well written but sad

I love this! It is awsome!

Please its been so long since you've started..please PLEASE CONTINUE I LOVE YOUR STORY!..STORIES! THERE AWESOME AND MAKE ME HAPPY PLEASE UPDATE!

m-mOrE it so good in a scary EMO wya :'(

it was awsome loved when riku cried and everythig else