I think it would of been funnier if Sion went and hit on Leann. Then a little bit more funny get backs. And after that they should of then had the big fight that Volt fixes.

that was funny

hey that was really good! write more fics!

Aww! That was so sweet and cute!! Go SioN!!! WOO!!! SION AND DOMINQUE FOREVER!!

Heh, heh, this was cool! I love D/S fics... There aren't enough of those in this category, damn it...

?? I DONT GET IT!!!! O.o?

Ha, ha. That was funny. Dominique can be a little irrating at times, no offence. But this was funny. Nice job.

At first the fan-fic was a bit strange to me, but when I really "got used" to the story, I began to like it.
The ending is very good. The story is very sweet on the whole.

hehe!! I like it I like it! I love Sion he is such a cutey! And Kuo... Who does he think he is?! Like she would really choose him over Sion! I know I wouldn't! hehe anyways I liked it -Dan Ornitier

Hmmm...well this was certainly interesting to say the least. I think this should be the beginning of a good story.

That was so cute!!