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Crystalice24201 2007-07-18 . chapter 1
Hm... Drama Drama!
You really know how to make a girl on the edge of her seat =)
*pokes* more? please? pretty pretty please?
Anyways, awesome job! A little plot twist so early never hurt anyone =)
random nobody 2007-01-05 . chapter 1
OMG! I loved the first chapter! Are you gonna write more for it? I hope so!
LilRockerGirl4Life 2006-12-17 . chapter 1
UPDATE!please? 'Cause I love this story and all the other storys that you have written.
Inumaru12 2006-09-21 . chapter 1
OMG I love this so far! Sorry i havent spoken to you in so long. i have to use the computer at school to get on fancition or aol. uh this computer thing sucks *sob* i hope you update!

P.S. school started! *sob*
darkriku01 2006-08-02 . chapter 1
hmm..pretty cool..this makes me think of sukisyo for some reason...but its good..can't wait for the next chapter
Jennipher-willbedeleted- 2006-06-24 . chapter 1
I'll ** sick Shesshy on you if you don't update really soon! Sorry for the lanuage. But please update really soon! I almost cried! OMG I freaking love tihs story!
Shiguna 2006-06-23 . chapter 1
Hi! I think I left a review for some other story of yours... I can't remember. ANYWAY! It's that crazy lady Shig come to rain comments on you!

I really love this chapter, and how the story is working out so far. I shall check it every day like the stalker I am! But I'm not allowed to stalk the authors, don't worry. Curse me and my rule-following mind. Back to the point. This sort of makes me think of Psychic Academy. It's awesome, though! You made one of those plots that make me think "Wow, I never really thought of that! NEAT! -saves-"

You've been...

SPIZZAZZED!

By Shig. Again? I can't remember. T.T I always forget. I FORGOTZ, LAWL.
shese1 2006-05-31 . chapter 1
that was good even though i have no idea what his powers are.. i guess it's a suprise, i think
FernClaw 2006-05-17 . chapter 1
FC: Wow! it's a new twist from my amazing authoress friend! My little KH cast are currently in the middle of a war with my warrior cast. -points towards random chaos-
Fern: -staggers up- I... Hate... CATS...--collapses
FC: I told you you'd lose... Kingdom Hearts Characters are way to cocky..
Tysonkaiexperiment 2006-05-15 . chapter 1
Tke: Dun dun dun! I bet Riku remembers every little detail!!
Riku: *growls* i bet this'll end up just like Sukisyo and everything. Forgetting memories, multiple personalities, both personalities in love and me and Sora would fall in love.
Tke: funny how it's RikuSora from KH and SoraNao from Sukisyo, ne?
Riku: >< NOT REALLY!! *vein*
Tke: *sweatdrop* don't get mad at me, i'm just reading.

UPDATE SOON!
Bonnie Mizuhara 2006-05-10 . chapter 1
HEY!! You have to continue this!! Argh!! I read um Flee from Our Troubles our something like that and I forgot to review, I'M SORRY!! Anyways, I cry for Sora so much especially what happened at the end of Silver Haired Savior... Sora's too sweet and innocent, I hope you continue this story soon! I really wanna know what happens next!
Dunkelmur 2006-05-08 . chapter 1
I love this fic! Um.. Well I love all your fics but right now I'm going to say something about this. so.. I wonder what will happen when Sora and Riku meets again.. anyway, update soon! ..and have a great day! ^_^
Sai-ryo Aura Feana 2006-05-06 . chapter 1
Wow... Awesome story so far!!
Can't wait to see what else you have planed for it!!
Hope you continue and update it soon, R-K-M!
its-sora 2006-05-06 . chapter 1
Oh I like this!

Continue! It's very interesting!!
skyandland 2006-05-06 . chapter 1
So great! So very very great! I've always wanted another story where Sora has powers. And then, the are psychic powers! Psychic powers rock! Anyway, it's so awesome. I can't wait to see if you finish this story.
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