The only problem with this one is that its Birchfall, but of course I assume your wrote it before you knew. Anyway it was nicely done i give you props. Tragic ending with them not seeing each otheer anymore though

o wow that was like so good but it was so sad! you write awesome stories! i loved it! gives glacierclaw a cookie... (um sorry but whenever i like someone i give em a cookeh lolzies) that end part with the rock was hilarious!! i almost fell of mah chair laughin lolzies! great story!

It was sad. But I like it. Poor Birchdude. Poor Appledudette. I wonder what happened to Applekit, Mashkit, and Toadkit in some of the other books.

Aww, that was so sweet! I love ApplexBirch fics, I've even written one myself. Weird, we both gave Applekit the same warrior name (Appleheart).

I guess this was written before The Sight, so you didn't know his warrior name is Birchfall, but other then that, GREAT oneshot. check my C2. It's on there.

Lol...the names aren't THAT bad, Squirrelflight's a bit long, yes, but it's more interesting than Squirrelclaw/heart/wtvr.
Anyway, that was so sad ... very nicely written.

“Birchfoot doesn’t fit you, I think. What is wrong with your leader? Why can’t he name cats?” Now that is funny! I seriously think that Erin Hunter's gotten worse at naming cats. I mean really. Squirrelflight? Leafpool? Ferncloud? What's up with that?

aw... cute.

So sad...

It was really good, I liked the way you spaced the three things out... that was my favorite part of Starlight too, when he's all like "it's not FAIR!" it was so cute! lol.

but i think your problem is that the good-bye at the end is a bit sudden. Like it's smashed together with him seeing her again. I'd say maybe put just a space in there, or something. that's my thought. it was good, i loved it!

That was great... Sad ending though *sniffle*

the end was the best! Poor birchkit...man! Stupid rocks...killed Oakheart too. Squirrelflight should be Squirrelheart or claw. Stupid Firestar. At least Leafpool got a cool name!

Oh... This is so sad. I wrote a chapter about Birchkit&Applekit in my couple story. What about Birchbark for Birchkit's warrior name? The only thing was Firestar's insensitivity. I mean, think about Graystripe and Silverstream. And Bluestar and Oakheart! He was soo understanding and kind for them. Sorry, I just don't get it. Greeat story other than that. Really sad though.

Awesome...And sad.

I really like this, it's very pretty, and sad...

-Chrie