Reviews for Do any endings come happily?

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Ronin-N-Gang 2007-05-25 ch 15,	abuseHe didn’t recognize where he was- whatever its arguable virtues, the swamp was not his house, nor anywhere in the surrounding hills near his house. For some unknown, inexplicable reason his apparition had failed. Remus’ anger is clouding his judgment… I just hope that Sirius has made it to the house alright! Sirius was gone. Again. Oh no! He just has to be alright… WOOT I finally caught up with everyone in this particular story! Now I just have to keep reading all of the other stories I’ve managed to build up while away at college and babysitting -_- Oh well… Can’t wait for the next chapter ^_^
Ronin-N-Gang 2007-05-25 ch 14,	abuse“Wait, Professor!” Harry had frantically shoved his way through the Order members, pleadingly holding out his hands to Remus. “I thought he was dead. No one told me he was alive. Please, let me- let me see him.“ Oh poor Harry! He must feel so betrayed by no one even telling him that his godfather was still living… Hell I know I would had I been in his shoes!
Ronin-N-Gang 2007-05-25 ch 13,	abuseJames was a good name. “No… But James is-“ Wait! What am I doing! Lunging out, he caught James’s sleeve. James lurched backward, but Sirius maintained his hold and attempted to pull him into the room. Well from the books, Harry does look and sound like James… I can see why Sirius would think he’s his father. This story get more and more interesting each chapter!
Ronin-N-Gang 2007-05-25 ch 12,	abuseThe thing on top of him whined before giving his face a rough, sloppy kiss. Oh gods I thought Sirius was dead there for sure! They were in his bedroom at number twelve Grimmauld Place. Oh no… Sirius will be in for one big shock…
Ronin-N-Gang 2007-05-25 ch 10,	abuseAh man I’m 6 chapters behind T.T This is what I get for ignoring my stories for so long… Alright. From the letter – this means that Sirius is actually Sirius… right?
TheSmallestGhost 2006-08-14 ch 15,	abusewell that chapter is just a fill in...but where would sirius go? if he has some (or all) of his memories back then it would be obvious that he would go to places that incur some familer sensations, right? (unless he was kidnapped again!) as for your comment on harry, what do you mean on going along with the crowd. after the events of losing sirius and his recent fallout with dumbldore...harry such mistrust the order. so why would he'd be on agreement? besides with the trauma harry went through, its safe to say that harry would have been gung ho at supporting remus...heck perhaps helping him! anyways, continue on with the updates, olivia
TheSmallestGhost 2006-08-01 ch 14,	abuseokay...now i get it...but why did remus act so..cold towards harry? i thought he would ask him to come with them. does he think harry's with dumbledore? lets Go! olivia
TheSmallestGhost 2006-08-01 ch 13,	abuseim so confused know...but sirius' memory seemed to be out of wack! but at least harry knows that sirius is alive, so that's good! continue on, olivia
EsScaper 2006-07-30 ch 14,	abuseIt was nice to have the scene clarified by seeing it from Remus's POV. I am saddened, however, that there is no more to read. I certainly am glad that I got back into your story. It is very good, and I will definitely read your next update as soon as it is posted. Great job, Esc.
EsScaper 2006-07-30 ch 13,	abuseI really like the fact that Sirius seems to be "out of time". His thoughts, or memories if you will, are going back and forward in time...right? At the end of the chapter he knew that Remus was a werewolf, so he has come closer to the present. I found his child-personality very endearing. It cracked me up when he found the firewiskey and was bewildered as to why it would be there...too funny. You are certainly going strong with this story. The last few chapters are especially enjoyable. Esc.
EsScaper 2006-07-30 ch 12,	abuseWell that certainly was an exciting couple of chapters! Sorry I haven't been reading this story for a while...don't ask me why. I just got the updates for 13 and 14, and went back to the beginning. I certainly like your story since Sirius is actually behaving in a more interactive way. His memory might still be quite shattered, and he is still blind, but he's more "himself" than he was earlier. I love the change and look forward to seeing what you have in store in the next two chapters. Esc.
Shadows 2006-07-11 ch 12, anon.	abuseBrilliant and flawless as always. I love the way you portray Sirius's amnesia and occasional fits into childhood with so much ease. Your writing style is so smooth, it managees to convince you that nothing is actually wrong with him...as if he's always been like this. And Remus...his strength and helplessness...the wolf's emotions are beautifully described through its actions. I'm not sure what else to say. Just...keep on writing...you're brilliant!
TheSmallestGhost 2006-07-10 ch 12,	abusei'm confused...very confused..so is sirius dead? or remus?
Savage spiritz 2006-06-15 ch 11, anon.	abuseWell, not much happened in this chapter...but its as well written as always. I absolutely love how you describe each of the character and convey their feelings, their confusions, their naivety in such simple words...and Remus is nothing short of admirable. Still, there are a lot of questions unanswered and I look forward to reading the next chpter soon. Update quickly!
EsScaper 2006-06-13 ch 10,	abuseOk, so this means that they are both "undead"...right? Are you planning on somehow curing them of this? Your title seems to indicate that there isn't a happy ending awaiting us at the end of this story. For God's sake, please at least give Sirius back his sight. For some reason that seems to be the worst affliction of all to me. He can't see his "Moony" and it breaks my heart. Esc.

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