please make more KFxJinx stories, they are my fave couple in TT _

At first I had no clue who was talking because it was the first person view, I didn't really know until I read what it was about. But other than that it was good.

mazing

that was honestly really good.I Like it :)

Yours truely

TTSpeed Demon1

u should make this a two sot with his opinion for the next one

just an idea

loved it!

This is good!

Great fic. Excellent description of Jinx's feelings.

Keep the good writing.

This is fairly well written but, IMO, you made a mistake by going to the first person point of view. Who is Jinx saying these things to? Herself, presumably. But it doesn't sound natural. It sounds sort of dear diary-ish which is always a bit forced. It might have been better to be just a little more vague like natural, stream of consciousness thoughts would be. Again, it seems better than most things on this site but I think you should have gone to 3rd person omniscient or been more sketchy, more natural in the thoughts expressed. Just one opinion.