Wow! Lina and Zel! I never would have expected that. Nice Surprise

Heloo...I'm now honored to accept your bid of one million dallors for me story!

-Roly

one word...KAWAII!

Good story. Just curious. If those two kids met Lina and the gang during their trip, shoudn't Lina (and the others) remember it later? So the dragon cuisine won't actually be a surprise for the older Lina...

Kawaii! Reading this was a delight. The characterizations and story were great, and the part where the Slayers were misled into believing that Xellos was the father was downright hilarious. Sylphiel's reaction was great too.

yee hee hee hee! that was soooo cute!

Awwwww Esis this ficcie is so cute! _ I love it! It's just so cute! Well anyways keep it up kay? Ja!

very very cute!

Hmm... it's got good suspence, and some humour, but it is a tad hard to follow.