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| anonymous 2008-07-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like feminist writing as much as the next liberal woman and parts of this drift were well done. But each beginning sentence was wanting. I realize this is probably because you tried to connect the word strong and girl in many different ways but most of them kinda failed. It made me stop and quirk an eyebrow after reading them. The fic was too short and, unfortunately, the last line was a horror. Like a bad summary novice writers tack on. Really corny. Shallow. Not a good way to wrap up at all. That said, I'm posting this as anonymous because I am a fan of some of your other works and I want you to be able to get rid of this review if you so wish (since you might be one of those writers who freak out and want to erase all negative criticism). That's cool with me. But I just wanted to let you know that this particular fic was a huge turn off. |
| xxguesswhoxx 2008-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseKunoichi kickass! XD |
| chibi heishi 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseNice. This is a very good summary of the girl's strengths - as ninjas and as girls. |
| midnightwaters 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseKunoichi totally pawn shinobi. |
| vikkaayBYAH 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseHeh, different spin on things from everything I read. It's nice. -heart- ^^ |
| The Penumbra 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseVery well written! |
| Sairalinde Inwe 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really liked that one! I thought that was really inspiring; you managed to portray the strength that each kunoichi has while still saying that yea they are girls. Nice work! |
| Neko42 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseSo if kunoichi means female ninja, what is a male ninja? |
| Ribs On The Run 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseYeah! Go the kunoichi! Nice fic. I like how you acknowledge their strengths/weaknesses and femininity. |
| Ms Trick 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseAww, I really liked this. Kudos for giving the girls some well-deserved spotlight. ;) |
| Nozomi-sama 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseYou accurately portrayed each girl in a sort of less is more tactic. Keeping it simple gave the story more meaning and feel. Anyway, it was very nice and well thought out. |
| iSlothu 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseIt's very touching. |
| HannahSakura.Pinoy 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI luv it! |
| Arashi-chan23 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseSweet, sentimental, but nice. |
| Sifauna Auria 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abuse=D i agree. girls are strong in ways so subtle that they are often overlooked. i like it. *nods* |