The last line. Brilliant.

Brilliant. The tidbit on Hinata made me smile. But it was the part on Sakura that I loved the most.

Excellent stuff. You're a very good writer.

Succinct, entirely accurate, and a bit moving.

COOL! Kunoichis are strong and amazing!

I love this story, and how it captures the viewpoints.

Sakura's part? Truly awesome, because I felt it ring strong with me. Indeed, why can't she both cry *and* fight? ) Loved it to pieces and the short nature of the fic worked very well with the heaviness of each smaller section.

aw! I loved the hinata one !

Oh, I really liked this. The style you wrote it in flows very well, and I loved how you covered the reasons and opinions of the kunoichi. I lurve it!

That's a great story. Love the concept and how you highlighted how different all of them are. Great job!

I recall reading this on a forum somewhere. Such a simple, lovely snapshot piece. :)