Fantastic story!

your stories are amazing! I've read two so far and they were wonderfully written.
I think in chapter four you repeated the last quarter of the chapter - when Nigel sees Sydney alive in the crowd of students

I Loved this one and I have to ask. May I translate it too? Please!

Yet again another amazing story! you had me crying at the start when my sister came in she thought I was actually hurt, ecstatic and in wonder when she came back and angry when you wrote about Karen, I mean I was really mad and I felt the need to beat that creep to dust. Those are just some of the emotions I felt well reading your story I truly felt like it was real and could feel the emotions of every situation. You are a great writer and have an amazing talent. I do not like to read but when it comes to your stories I am addicted. Please don’t stop writing you are brilliant!
-Roxy

bravo! bravo!
i know this is a bit delayed

but it was such a beautiful story!

Great chapters and story. Loved it as always. Look forward to others. Audra

This was great!! I really liked the fun part with Karen in part 15. And the proposal part had me smiling...and I liked that Dallas was in it. I've always liked Dallas (in fact, he's got a cameo in the story I'm working on now, the one I told you about.) The ending epilogue was so much fun. You wrapped this one up nicely.

Aww you finished both stories for us. You are a darling my dear..

“Yep,” he agreed as he kissed her wet forward. Sounded a little weird..

This was a nice break from doing ecology ( I am never doing a summer course again. Esp. seeing I have to finished all the crap before I go to Halifax).

Good story.

Kiddies again pish posh

Good chapter. I like how you use 'as you wish'

Pish who are you calling kiddies? I will be 19 in a few months.:P

Good chapter

Great chapter. Nigel is so sweet to arrange that surprise for Karen. Loved it. Look forward to more soon. Audra

This chapter had a nice, warm, friendshippy feel to it. I really liked it.

Aww what a sweet little chapter.:P

oh wow! that was so sweet! update again!

Good chapter. I like the ending of it, showing how sydney it protective of them. Also how karen went to sleep in syds arms.