it's good! REALLY GOOD! IS DANNY BEAST BOY? CAUSE IVE HERD HIM BE CALLED DANNY BEFORE BUT BB'S REAL NAME IS GARFIELD.. SO YEAH... ^^;

I was wondering if you were going to continue this.

One thing, try to separate the quotations by who's speaking, a new paragraph for each new speaker. It makes things less confusing.

I don't mean to be rude, but almost this whole story so far is an exact quotation of the episode "Go!" the only part that isn't is the beginning of chapter one.

nice but a bit confusing

you gotta write more