wow... *runs hands through hair* that was .. interesting that must suck to be them losing memory and being someone else you seriously need to write more

When will the next chapter show up, I really want to know. Also, I think you should give a little more description to the personality.

I like this story.You're a good writer and I like the Artemis Fowl stories too.It brings justice to it with your style of writing

Short version -

1) What do you mean "a freckly face...Ew!...Then again, maybe not. Maybe he's this cool and handsome guy." You got a problem with freckles?

2) "Spears" is just a crap last name to pick for any character, because of its association with a particularly sleazy, ditzy, trailor, pop **.

3) Holly acts like a frigging airheaded teen. Just b/c she lost her memories doesn't mean she has to become a moron.

*throws books at the computer* Grr...Holly--Oh, sorry, "Helena" seems to snobby and shoppaholicy to be Holly...And that ticks me off...

But I suppose it's okay. The plot is good. And the scene at the cafe was definitely in character. Very much like Holly and Artemis to be arguing.

a bit on the short side. i admit though, i was a little disappointed when i read the ending to this one, as it probably would have been a little more interesting if artemis hadnt apologise like that, but it's still okay.

your story makes me happy. they met! even though it is annoying how the parents are like 'that would be a good mathc' or whatever... only annoying because it would annoy me if that were me... well, update! i love this story! it is one of the few non-zukoXkatara stories i still read... actually, it might be the only one... well, update!
XWith Love!
l.W.

longing to meet her agian heh. he he A bit more of an idea of what's happening! I really liked it *I say that everytime don't I* So update!

/:/Brizo/:/

muahaha! yay! love it! update asap!

BANZAI!
~hollybridgetpeppermint

Okay so i haven't reviewed for a while. Nice chapter there camarade! Keep up the good work :) Hope you'll upload faster, I know classes are starting next week.

Z.
wake me up when you have done the next chapter

I want more! Helena is the humanized Holly, right?

Yay! A new chapter,I am really wondering what will happen. Will they just live thier life on and not know anything about each other or will mulch break free and tell them both of thier past lives? Not that i really want you to tell me because that would spoil the story.

ooh! that's so fun! i like this story... but i have to wonder, how old is holly in human years? not that it matters as she and artemis are detined to be together, but... well, anyway, update!
XWith Love!
L.W.

NO!! DON'T DO IT HOLLY!! HE'S NOT WORTH IT! Well, he is but...DON'T DO IT ANYWAY!