Really pretty and sweet; I liked it.

The only thing wrong was "thrive"; you spelt it wrong.

Still, I loved it! Shuichi's Ryuchi's fallen angel, yay!

wow so dark and deep keep writing these poems hey you wanna know something funny i once wrote a poem and the title is also called 'fallen angel' small world huh * plays music in background*

^_^ C'est tres Magnifique! Well Done

Ohh... angsty... update soon!

I love this poem! It's so sad, great job! ^^

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