 Spidey3000 2008-10-23 . chapter 4LOLs throughout this story! Ozai as Charle makes me laugh, as does Zhao of all people as Bosley! Update soon! |
 EvilMarshmallow13 2008-08-13 . chapter 1I squee'd so much when I read the last section. I don't know why, other than just really, really liking Charlie's Angels (and having seen it recently to know what exactly was coming next-which was probably the resaon I squee'd, because I love intro scenes and the thought of what happened in the CA's one...argh, that was hilarious).
A few minor grammar things that could've been fixed, but all in all, the chapter was good. General Fong...I'm tempted to think that was the one that was trying to trigger the Avatar State. In which case, nice, I totally forgot about him. Go minor characters working their way into fanfiction. :D |
 bdf187 2008-08-11 . chapter 4Very interesting capture, can't wait to see how this all plays out |
 InkHeart17 2008-01-26 . chapter 4First scene was incredibly sexy for a capture... Oh and the comeback for Mai's "young" comment was very cool! |
 InkHeart17 2008-01-26 . chapter 3First of all, I effing love that discription of Azula creating lightning! "spiking in the excited air like spider webs in the winds" So awesome! Azula's very in-character with her cunning demeanor throughout.
And General Haruko, a nod to Full Metal Alchemist? |
 InkHeart17 2008-01-25 . chapter 1That parody of Charlie's Angels intro is too good! |
 Jack The Riddler 2008-01-01 . chapter 2sweet story, i need to finish later |
 ... 2007-12-30 . chapter 4 cool story! loved it! |
 Sanguine Roseatte 2007-07-03 . chapter 4this story is awesome! please get another chapter up soon!
oh, and have a cookie! =) |
 Squeaky Phantom 2007-05-27 . chapter 4I like. Especialy the way Azula,Mai, and Ty Lee are portrayed. I hope to read more. |
 k 2007-03-12 . chapter 4 are you ever going to write another chapter? |
 Victoria 2007-02-16 . chapter 4 i realy liked your story and the way you kept the charecter personalitys from the show. some prts were a bit confusing at times.
other then that it was great.
good job! |
 blueskiesahead 2006-11-22 . chapter 4This was okay. |
 susiipie 2006-11-21 . chapter 4lol i love this story so far! aw poor aang stuck in a crate. well update soon! |
 RaidersEcho 2006-10-19 . chapter 4cool |