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so happy you updated. really i am.
hahah.
i loved this and want much much more.=]
update soon please?

I really would love to leave you a long review, but I don't really have the time. ... I barely have time to read the chapter at all, let alone review it, too. It's good, though. I like it.

Lovely :)

oh my god, i think i'm in love with your story!!
by the way, i do have an account here at i'm just too lazy to go sign in >.> i'm writing this in a very uncomfortable chair in an airport so i think you'll find it in your heart to forgive me. but seriously! i can't wait until you update again, please do it soon!

This is turning out to be a great story. At first i thought that it was going to be a boring story but i didn't expect the plot to be so thriling. Keep up the good story writing.

~Ichigo150

I love this.
♥

Wow. This is good. And i love these kinds of stories. Keep writing!

I like the development in this chapter. It seems like the plot is really starting to move. There are several grammatical errors, mainly with sudden changes in tense or commas where there need not be any. The characterisation has remained smooth though. I am curious to see what happens with Remus' home life in the future of this story.

I can't wait for more :)

Love this. Kinda as simple as that.

I really appreciate that Sirius isn't only focused on his budding relationship with Remus. I think that it is as equally important that he remains concerned about the boy's living situation.

Again, love.

Sorry it took me a little while to review after favouriting... I know how annoying I find that on my own work and then I go and do it on yours, I'm such a hypocrite!

I really do love this story, there's a wonderful realism whilst still retaining that brilliant tragedy about Remus' character! (yes, I'm most definitely a sucker for tragic characters, especially if said characters should be lycanthropes! hehe) I love the way that the character interaction seems very real and very natural, there's none of that business of stiff unrealistic dialogue or unnatural "jump into bed at first touch" scenario. Job very well done. There are all sorts of little bonuses to make me smile as well; Dorian Gray is one of my alltime favourite books, and, being somewhat of a gothic elitist myself rather liked the idea of Sirius having a little goth moment. Some particular favourite moments would be James "suffering" from heterosexuality and Sirius not wanting to let on that he read slash. Little touches like that are like glitter on a beautiful picture. Or icing on a very nice slash cake indeed.

You make me really love sirius character more than is usual for me. I admit to being possibly the world's most merciless Harry Potter series hater, but Sirius and Lupin I will make exceptions for, and your Sirius is lovely. He reminds me somewhat of my own character, Tornac (from the Eragon series), in that he is a teacher in a teacher/pupil relationship and that he's seemingly fallen head over heels for his pupil and is battling with whether or not to follow on said infatuation.

Definitely achieves a favourite and a story watch from me, thank you for enjoyable reading and I hope you intend on updating soon.

Lu x [Last Generation Lintu]

By the way, you know, I'm always free to beta if you'd like one. (That's not to say that you NEED one, of course! I think your work that you said was unbeta'd hadn't any particularly noticeable errors! :) )

Love the chapter, it's so cute! I do think it would be good to include a scene sometime in the story with Huddo and his gang, maybe just with them trying to work out what's going on? But I loved it anyway, and I hope you can update soon!

awesome story!

Great story, keep writing.

I loved this chapter. Very well written and very interesting.
I hope you update soon, cause I can´t wait to read more of this ^^°

best wishes,
Cel