My face hurts from smiling so much :D

Beautiful ending, Ally and thank you for finishing this series. *Claps enthusiastically*

Dear Ally, so much time has passed since we first joined you as you led us through the journey of Joey and Mai's thirty kisses. From the first kiss, to their much awaited wedding day, we saw them laugh, cry, mature and create a family together. During that time, we watched your writing mature over time, becoming more skillful, flourished and intricate. I would like to thank you for sharing your story with us, it was a really interesting and entertaining read. Most of all, I would like to say a very big thanks for sticking with the story even after all this time. It must have not been an easy task, which makes your efforts even more praise-worthy. I wish you all the best in the future, and if you ever decide to write another story, know you'll have a supporter in me.

I might say all thirty are wonderful

Beautiful ending. And I loved their speeches!

Oh my gosh, I love this story so much! It's cute, funny, with touches of emotion here and there. Your grammar is pretty understandable and you do a great job keeping in character. I was in love with this story from the first few chapters. I love how you depict different areas in Joey and Mai's relationship, it's truly beautiful. I'm going to continue reading and I hope you update soon!

What a great chapter Ally! I really couldn't stop laughing while reading. You did a great job describing Joey as the over-worried dad. His mannerisms were spot on and the dialogue was colorful and funny. I especially like your narrative; you paint such vivid visuals. The name Quinn was a Glee reference, but it also shows who the head of the household is. ;)

That was REALLY cute! I loved it!

Oh my gosh! I was laughing so hard through this! Joey was an overprotective big brother, so it only makes sense that he'll be overprotective with his little girl. Good job!

Cute ending.

Eben though I am a huuuge may/joey fan, at the start i could never see them together as a couple- mai seemed way too independant and Joey a bit too goofy. But!

After watching waking the dragons and reading this fanfic im truly convinced in polarshipping

Well Done ;)

I can't believe you're finishing it!

One of the first J/M fics I read, and I thought it was going to be left unfinished forever more, so I'm really happy!

Wow, your writing has improved so much since you started the fic, but it's still cute as ever. The chapters really cure my fluff craving :)

Well done

Former lurker

LuckyBlackCat

Let me start my post by saying: awwwwww cuuuute! With that out of the way, i really liked this scene from their family life. It was a nice detail, adding the dueling mentions and showing us how they handle being apart while one of them is away on tournaments. You did a great job introducing us to their little girl and describing her personality. You just know she is the boss in that house! As for name suggestions, it could be something short like Claire, Faith, Faye, Quinn or Skye. Thanks for the fast update and looking forward to the next one!

I've always gravitated toward Angela, myself. And this was very sweet. Good work.

Finally, you updated. Great chapters, all six of them!