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| SuGaRLiLy 2007-07-27 ch 1,  | abuseWow, I thoroughly enjoyed this. I liked the level of detail that you put into this- and your last stanze (the one before JKR's) was chilling, in a way. I also liked that he turned his hat inside out for good luck- that was really clever. Awesome job on this. =] |
| Cynicism and Happiness 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseMaybe it should have rhymed to keep it consistent with the last part by J.K. Rowling, but besides that, it's angsty. Nice one. |
| xkidrogue 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseUmm...could've been a bit more poem-ish, but overall interesting. Good. You're a good writer. |
| InkandPaper 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseGood story to go with the poem! These are my favourite lines: How dare you look me in the eye? Do you not know at whom you look? E, chilling! |
| Starred Signature 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI love this!! It's so good! :D Definately adding to my favorites :) |
| Miranda Took 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful.Truly wonderful. You are good at rhymes. It sort of sounds like a mediaval ballad or folk song sung by a wandering minstrel-the plot, language ands style all add to the effect. |
| Iva1201 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abuseOh... (-: ... Have you known they added main character Horace Slughorn? Would be now easier to find fics about him (as well as other characters). (-: |
| Kittyt3000 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was really touching; i liked it a lot. |
| Nimbus 1944 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseAnd Odo the Hero has lived once again, And has fought for a cause that is good; Dead-Luthien raises a fourth voice in praise As only a fic-crafter could. Write on, Odo poets, a fifth and a sixth! We can't say enough for the man. O rise, Odo's Army, and sharpen your quills, And then sing us a song, if you can. |
| Bagge 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseOdo the hero, so bravely defends Every muggle in need that is dire With his his hat inside out - that's for luck - he will fight With a currage that we must admire Dead-Luthien, please take your seat by the hearth; You have earned it by right of this tale You are the fourth bard who's sung about Odo Who died, but who's story prevail |
| Tereesete 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseHeh. Me likeths this poem. Though it looked more like a story-poem though. Anyway, it was really good for a first attempt. Keep it up! |