Wow, I thoroughly enjoyed this. I liked the level of detail that you put into this- and your last stanze (the one before JKR's) was chilling, in a way. I also liked that he turned his hat inside out for good luck- that was really clever. Awesome job on this. =]

Maybe it should have rhymed to keep it consistent with the last part by J.K. Rowling, but besides that, it's angsty. Nice one.

Umm...could've been a bit more poem-ish, but overall interesting. Good. You're a good writer.

Good story to go with the poem! These are my favourite lines:

How dare you look me in the eye?
Do you not know at whom you look?

E, chilling!

I love this!! It's so good! :D Definately adding to my favorites :)

This is wonderful.Truly wonderful. You are good at rhymes. It sort of sounds like a mediaval ballad or folk song sung by a wandering minstrel-the plot, language ands style all add to the effect.

Oh... (-: ... Have you known they added main character Horace Slughorn? Would be now easier to find fics about him (as well as other characters). (-:

That was really touching; i liked it a lot.

And Odo the Hero has lived once again,
And has fought for a cause that is good;
Dead-Luthien raises a fourth voice in praise
As only a fic-crafter could.

Write on, Odo poets, a fifth and a sixth!
We can't say enough for the man.
O rise, Odo's Army, and sharpen your quills,
And then sing us a song, if you can.

Odo the hero, so bravely defends
Every muggle in need that is dire
With his his hat inside out - that's for luck - he will fight
With a currage that we must admire

Dead-Luthien, please take your seat by the hearth;
You have earned it by right of this tale
You are the fourth bard who's sung about Odo
Who died, but who's story prevail

Heh. Me likeths this poem. Though it looked more like a story-poem though.

Anyway, it was really good for a first attempt. Keep it up!