aww cutsyy :)

wtf mate

How sweet and poetic! I'm so sad that it's done, though=(

However, I'll always be looking out for your new stuff. Everything is always so sweet and amazing.

'Til your next story=)

~Bianka-chan.

Gah, I'm sorry! I haven't reviewed this story's last two chapters yet! I'll get to that right now!

He loved to watch her, given that it was sometimes creepy. Haha, I thought some personality come into that sentence. Cute.

Fluff, fluff, fluff! Your stories always have the power to cheer me up=) You must be a happy person! It just seems that way.

Next chapter!

~Bianka-chan.

aww...

wait, it thought Reiyh has blue eyes

its a cute chapter.Very sweet,and is flows indefinetly.Look for another chapter soon Ashley!

-Tolea

what lovely imagery, this fic is so...kawaii...yup it is...so peaceful and heartwarming...keep it up.

Short and yet very sweet, I love it! Please continue! If you don't I'll be sad.

I haven't reviewed this yet, have I?

Haruki: ...Uh, no?

-.-; Thank you, Captain Obvious. Anyway...

This is a beautiful fanfic, a nice breath of fresh air for me among my action-y favorites. Each chapter is peaceful and wonderful; the little moments that are snatched up each day.

Haruki: And this chapter is no exception. It was a pleasant change to snap direction into a moment with Denzel and Marlene.

Yeah; it was nice to see him being fatherly with those two. ^_^

Not bad.Ilike it.Please,continue writing.Im very proud to have a freind with such skill as your own.

-Tolea

Dear Lord, how can you give her such a talent in writting and not in me. Joking! But I'd like to know where you get your inspiration from? Like all these stories you've written are like familyhood, responsability, love, happiness. Aside from the people you know. Like any great Final Fantasy games? Animes? RPG games? Because more I read the more I'm imspired by you, but I can't only rely on just you alone, there are many of my favs authors out there that writes, humorious, romantic, adventerous actions, etc. Because truthfully I feel like I want to follow your footsteps as a writter. But I also like to be inspired more than my fav authors and their frickin' amazing stories. Especially Unspoken, Hope, Eye of a Hawke, Gundam Seed: GenTwo, and many more that I could not name in this review. You've really amaze me with each story, each chapter, each paragraph, each sentence, and each word. This chapter proves it.

I was a bit surprised to see you carry on in this fiction, but im all for it.

I think i saw you mention somewhere that you are considering stop writing cloti, if you do that i may have to go hunting.

Why not try squinoa if you want a small/quick change. I can help!'
(btw, you mentioned a joint project earlier, any update on that?_

I have one question. Are they married or are they still an unconventional family?

*sits quietly with an idiotic smile* you already know what im going to say, what else is there to say? oh well im going to say it anyways...CUTE! I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOU! ok getting too excited...well i like it so keep going!

Oh, this story is so refreshing! I love this whole settled-in/happy family vibe! All the other stories are about frustrating romance and sex. I mean, it's not like those stories are bad or anything, it's just that this story is so... I dunno... positive! Plus, it's a good story about parenting(which I hear is really hard, FYI)so that's entertaining in itself because it's so well written. You should really consider being an author.(I am and I haven't even posted yet!lol!)Well, anyway , keep up with the story! It's great!

I'm literally in tears. It's too sweet, too damn sweet. Ugh, it's hard to see what I'm writting cause of the water within my eyelits. Please, tell me this is from experience, if not, then you truly are a writter of the heart. Though, I said that countless times to you. You are more, of a writter to joyous moments of life, bringing the sadness of happiness. God bless you child! Judging by your writting of how to take care of infants. Truly shows that you are a potiential of being a lovable and caring mother to your children in the mere future. Please as always, update.