I have to say, at then end where you start questioning your writing while you're writing is probably my favourite part.

Hmm... Though I do enjoy drunk fics, I believe this is the first fic i've read that was written while drunk... Even though the typos were irritating, I loved it. I snorted at the "standerbys." ^^

That made my day. and its a cue ball, I think.

Wow, I so ** adore this. Writing when drunk... hehe, yeppers, I write when stoned... I so amaze myself. Anywho, I'm tired, so this is fun.

-Ajariel the Bloody- (fell in love with a dude, hope he's not dead)

hahahaha! you are sso funny!

Lmao that was quite amusing. I can't write stories when i am drunk, ahaha yur story was quite funny, whether or not it was supoose to be:P

omfg that was hilarious! it's so obvious that you were drunk while you wrote this, but it started out okay...it's just towards the end that it seemed like you had another two shots as you were typing lol. very bad, but very funny!
I was too lazy to log in, I don't know if I've reviewed this or not already...hehe, who cares!

It's very... drunk. It's actually not that bad. The spelling errors and strange commentary just add to the whole... confusion of the story. I think it's pretty good actually. ^_^

-A. W.

hahaha...this was funny...and you really need spell check, or a beta, because your spelling is so...bad...but the story was awsome it made up for the bad spelling...now that is a birthday night out..lol...see yha

this was the funniest thing i've read today. i'm studying for finals, and I has a headache, but not anymore.
this reminds me of many a drunken night of my own - the story telling, not the actual story - and it is just awesome.

thank you.

and it's a cue ball ~_^

Now that's a scene that should appear in an episode! Good job despite the spelling errors & your drunkenness. :D

This was beyond hilarious! I was rotflmao and yelling at my brother to come read. Chick, you write better drunk than a lot of people when they're stone sober.

I absolutely died at this: The big…let’s make him really big, just for ** and giggles, guy didn’t just throw the drink. No, he threw the whole glass. Maybe a pitcher would be more effective, and I bet it hurt worse. Okay, so he maybe picked up a pitcher from a nearby table, and hurled it at Nick, just because it’s fun to hurl things at Nick.

LMFAO. And kidnap him, and throw him out of windows, and hold him at gunpoint...

OT: Looks like we share a b-day, or at least they're close. Hope you enjoyed yours!

hunni those little white things are cue balls
but i loved this, even your little extras, highly entertaing

I couldn't stop laughing, it was so funny!

Oh my God, I don't think I have laughed that hard at a fic in a LONG time. And mainly because it was HORRIBLE. No offense, and you actually probably wrote better than I would be able to in an inebriated state, but still. I especially loved the thought process that was written in on whther you should leave certain things or change them.
Anyways, fan-freaking-tastic. That pretty much just made my day.
~K.Z.T.