That was intense! Couldn't take my eyes from the screen for a second. Your imagery is breathtaking--it's almost as if I'm standing right there in poor Logan's shoes.

Those guys really did him over one, didn't he?

Thanks for sharing. I'm off to your next piece.

BlackDew

Okay! Let's try this again. I've watched you slave away for weeks over this. Watched the story develop from a little squeak to a mighty roar. Watched you massage away your headaches (been the cause of a few of them - evil laff). Watched your writing style burst into flower.

This is easily your best work yet and I know even better is to follow. The story is raw and emotionally charged. Gripping! The harrowing sequences of Logan's ordeal are brought to life; appalling yet at the same time fascinating. You worked so hard to get the medical ramifications of the process right and it shows.

This is a damn good story.

Ooh!! This was so good! I'm such a visual thinker, i could see everything that Logan was seeing...::shudder:: Loved it loved it loved it!!
hugz,
rowena

19 days til X:3!

YES! You finally posted! You've done an incredible job here Dee, mixing in the gruesome description of how Logan was turned into a weapon with his horrified reaction to getting an inside view of the process. I know how much work you put into this and it's really paid off.