Ah, welcome back.I like the rewrite,it draws you in better than the other did.can't wait for the next chapter.

Squall as a GIRL!!? Okay, like it and want more. When is Seifer going to find out that 'he' actually is a she? Hopefully soon. The german name thing you found out earlier shocked me. So, Seifer's name is german? Cool. Here's a chocolate bar for you! ^_^

aww poor seifer, he's so hopeless. anyhoo i love it and can't wait for the next update. and when will seifer find out about squall? also i love how the lil bits of squall being girl come out lol its so good
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oh this is so cute, squally is so cute as a girl. i love it so far, i wonder if anyone will find out
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great story so far. Please update soon, can't wait till Seifer finds out Squall's a girl

lol mrs. k must be throwing a fit by now lolz ^__^ hopefully squall wont get into too much trouble. also if i was in rajin's spot i'd think seifer is slighly psychic or a great guesser. lol plz dont die at ur dads! we all love u too much for you to die!! ^_^ have fun!

Always good to see alittle humor thrown into any story involving this odd pair.Can't wait to see more on this story.

i wonder how long raijin can keep the secret. *shifty eyes* seifer is sharp, will he figure it out? buahahahahahaha i can't wait for the next chapter. ^^

Your story is awsome ! I really like Girl!Squall !
*giggles* i just tried to imagine a story about this subjet... and Tada ! I found yours !
I hope that you will update soon, because I can't wait to see the next chapter !

Will Seifer know soon that Squall is a girl ? and that he is his human guardian ?

Hope you update soon ! ^^
*favo + alert !*

I never thought i'd like this kind of fic, but here I am starving for more! The humor scenes are excellent, and i've now got the image of Squall obsessing over chocolate ice cream stuck in my head forever. By the way, is Squall growing wings? That's the only thing I could think of that would cause "him" to itch like "he" is. Anyways, keep up the good work!

oh another spiffy chapter. the secret has been reveild huh? i've been wating for that to happen. now it's getting REALLY good. update soon, i want to see raijin's reaction. XD

Very good. I like the story, a lot XD

I'd have paid to see Raijin's face in the end of the last chapter XD

Keep doing!

o.O wow Rai knows before Seifer lolz ^__^ o the greatness wonder if what Seifer'll do when he finds out Rai knows haha XD
names thing I knew about Seifers name it's really cool isn't it? Little facts from Final Fantasy are really cool!! Kinda like for Seifer's 'romantic dream' is also considered every young boy's dream to be a Knight or a Crusader (Seifer's cross on his sleeve)then I think Hyperion is also the Sun God, and then Leonheart was Richard the Leonheart who also was apart of the Crusade or something like that ^__^ history is so fun! sorry if I'm ranting I watched too many movies today and then it mixed together with Final Fantasy VI...wow I think this is the longest review I've ever typed in my life...I think I'll keep the others short and sweet then...lol short yet attention grabbing chapter!! Can't wait for the next one! ^_^

I like it,you don't see many of these stories and I for one love your writing style with it.ALittle choppy at times but its good.

FaB! Hurry up with he other chaps, would you!!?? I'm starting to get more and more impatient!