Woah! You're good! I love the style of your writing. I've always wanted to be able to write like that but I just can't. You do it perfectly!

You did a great job with the brothers and I really liked that you put in the voicemails and e-mails. Really showed how desperate Deans was and just the kind of thing he would do.

I loved the ending too, kinda gave me goosebumps ^^ The "what can you say?" was great!

Wonderful job, this is going to my favorites list!

Well I liked it! Not sure I understood a single ** thing but I liked it :)
Anna
MBCT

These are the times when I wish I was a writer and be able to clearly express myself other than “Gah! That was so good, I love it.”
This is what made me start watching the show; I wanted to see how the brothers relationship was and relate it back to your story. When I say I love it, I really do. It’s amazing.
I want everybody to read this and see how spectacular it is.

Okay don't take this the wrong way (coz its meant as a compliment honest) but you're writing is like modern art; not always clear, not always easily interpreted but always very visceral. You write from the gut - and I get that.

I know I reviewed this at LJ a lifetime ago, but I am re-reading faves today and just had to reiterate, now and forever, what an outrageously fantastic writer you are. You TRANSCEND writing. You just ARE - consciousness and thought and emotion and word, all blended so seamlessly, but with structure and purpose and oh.

Just oh.

Every time I read, you steal my breath, but I'm happy to let you have it.

This damn system won't let me quote, but in the end it doesn't matter. I'd just be quoting everything.

Yup. Steal my breath. Make me cry. Make me think and nod and say oh. (These are not statements of fact, but requests).

I'd tell you you're the cream in my coffee, but it would be a lie . . . you're the coffee.

Oh, my God. Wow. I'm speechless... so many things I wanted to point out that I liked, but... the whole thing... amazing.

Wow. That was amazing, so very well done. One of the best, most complex Supernatural fics I have encountered. Very well structured and written. Beautiful characterisation. A work of art.

*elf hugs and kisses*
Laivine

Holy frigging hell. This is awesome. And very literary in a way that really works. You really have an ear for character, and I love that even the emails they send to each other are discernable to who is sending them by the way they are typed. Great stuff! You should indulge yourself more often!

Absolutely awesome. The writing is stunning and original - I loved the phone messages and the last section on Communication. And yes, 'Thank god for Missouri'- I loved your Missouri. And I loved the boys working things out, Sam tentatively explaining and Dean listening and hearing. Guess that I loved it all. :-)

Ok, I don't understand why you only got 2 reviews. This fic is simply amazing, the flow is good and Dean and Sam are just perfect. You managed to picture their characters very well. All I can say is thanks for sharing.

Still I admit I didn't really understand the scars on Sam's hands and the thing with the gun. Were you talking about the colt or the gun used by Max to kill himself? Don't worry maybe it's just me who didn't got it. It happens sometimes, anyway I just wanted to say I really loved it.

To be honest, that was so fractured that it was beyond confusing. I understand the artistic method behind the writing, but in this case, it was TOO fractured and you lost me right about the beginning. *shrugs* Nice idea, but I couldn't follow.

Very cool. Catch ya on the flip side.