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| SunnyGoesNorth 2008-03-31 ch 6,  | abuseHi I really enjoy your story please please update PLEASE :-) |
| BloodyHellRose 2008-03-25 ch 6, | abuseThis is a very original idea. I can't really find any specific faults with the writing either- though I do think it could use some refinement. Perhaps you should find someone to beta for you? Kaelbrith's name seems a bit long, too, but on the whole, this seems to be a very nice story. Please update! -BloodyHellRose The Mad Vampiress |
| Ravenbolt 2008-03-10 ch 6, | abuseI love this story, your a very good writer. I hope to see another chapter up soon ^.^ |
| Beth 2007-12-20 ch 6, anon. | abusePlease write more of this story PLEASE we want more we want more |
| Solo Maxwell-Yamato 2007-11-08 ch 6, | abuseO__o What are T'nas and Telgar doing? That's very very interesting. Lovely story you've got going and I like how you've made St'kay react to everything that happens (or is asked *isathreeyearoldyaymating*). |
| Loving Green 2007-11-02 ch 6, anon. | abusei absolutely Adore this story! It's wonderful to see a greenrider once a while that isn't female. And St'kay's interaction with Kaelbrith's is ♥. there's so much potential to this story, and i really hope that you'll finish it! please come back to this soon! |
| Chaosmaiden07 2007-09-03 ch 6, | abuseYes, their in a wing! More please. |
| Chaosmaiden07 2007-09-03 ch 5, | abuseWhat will happen? Soo excited. |
| Chaosmaiden07 2007-09-03 ch 2, | abuseBetter, a litle more organized. Insted of 'said' try using a different words. It gets redundient after awhile. |
| Chaosmaiden07 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is very realistic excellent job. How about a queen? |
| H.E. Gray 2007-08-23 ch 6, | abuseOh. What /are/ T'nas and Telgar doing? -interested- And I have to say I'm loving the interaction between all the riders dependant on the colour of their dragon - because we all know that's how it'd really be. Shame this hasn't been updated in a while, but I'm hoping it just hasn't been abandoned - I really would like to see where you go with it. :D |
| aubergineautumn 2007-07-28 ch 6, anon. | abuseYour writing is so good! A very sympathetic, realistic, and tantalizing view of green dragonriders! More, please! |
| Fia 2007-06-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseOkay, NOW, this getting interesting. O-o-o-h, I wonder what T'nas is up to. And about Kaelbrith, would a female Bluerider perhaps be a solution? Since St'kay doesn't realy seem, well, like most male Greenriders. If a Blue wth a female Rider flew Kaelbrith. . . get my point? |
| OMG 2007-06-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseGREENS NEED MORE RECOGNITION! Sorry... Update! |
| Fia 2007-06-23 ch 3, anon. | abuse*chuckles* Shards, that boy thinks like myself, with the "Why did this happen," and "How come this and that..." and oh, Shards, his ability to keep his temper is SO impressive. I remember all the "How did a GIRL Impress a Bronze?" and blah blah like that, so I can identify with poor St'kay. Keep it up! |