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xzlioness
2008-07-22
ch 6,
abuseomg...i thought itachi was actually dead and that man was sasuke. i was so sad. anywayz great story. i luved it.
Muslin
2008-07-21
ch 6,
abuseI... I...
read Loophole and Genshi in 2 days... and they were the most tense days of my life. Where the characters cried, i almost did, too.
Speechless... and addicted
cooldot
2008-07-20
ch 6, anon.
abuseI wish Loophole and Genshi was Naruto canon. Anything else I say won't nearly be enough to describe the perfection of these stories. *bows*
Sam
2008-07-14
ch 6, anon.
abuseYou know, Leafy, I never was a fan of this couple... until... I saw a picture on that linked me to Loophole, and now there is this sequel. Now they are my favorite pair, all because you rock at portraying their personalities.

So, although you don't think you want to write any more of this story, I really must protest. I loved the story so much I printed it and gave it its own binder. It's even among my favorite stories of all time, published and otherwise.

And as awesome as it is AS it is, I believe Sasuke would have found them eventually. As Itachi said, Sasuke would forgive her one day, and I think he'd go looking. The battle of the century has only just been delayed... I feel like there is a chapter missing some ten years later, yet I feel now that you are the only one that can complete it.

SO I ask again, please, if you can find another tale in your imagination in this arc, please continue?

~Sam
icinnamonx3
2008-07-11
ch 1,
abuseloved this and loophole. thanks for actually completing your story because i know alot of authors end up never finishing their stories.
dark-angel-of-the-past
2008-07-09
ch 6,
abusePlease write a sequal! and if you did, THANK YOU!
Falling Ungracefully
2008-07-07
ch 6,
abusePERFECT ending!
Blackscarlet47
2008-07-03
ch 6,
abuseaww...it's great. I love your writing style and the plot and...everything!
Crimson-Embers
2008-06-30
ch 1,
abuseI know you said reviews are not necessary but i just had to give you some feedback. I read both of these in the past two days and they were beautiful stories, i just had to let you know.
Good luck with the rest of your writing.
:)
-Amy
forgetconnection
2008-06-29
ch 6,
abuseThis (and of course, Loophole) are the two greatest fanfics I have ever read. Probably some of the greatest stories in general I have ever read. If this had been a published book, I would have bought it. Your writing is incredible, and no other ItaSaku fiction will ever compare. Thank god it ended with Itasaku :) I was a bit worried. Hehe.

Anyway, just wanted to say thank you, I guess, for taking the time to write Loophole and this, both are amazing.

-Nicole
Shellderbeast
2008-06-28
ch 6,
abuseBest. Ending. Ever.

I think that really says it all. I can't believe how many twists that wonderfully creative mind of yours was able to come up with.

Be seeing you in a review of another of your stories soon most likely.
Shellderbeast
2008-06-28
ch 2,
abuseI keep smiling at that bus joke. Your writing is wonderful, and the pace and ideas are preventing me from leaving the computer, everythings so engaging.
Thank you for being so awesome. :)
sasudia
2008-06-27
ch 6,
abuseTHIS IS THE GREATEST THING I HAVE EVER READ ON FFN.
brilliant.
Loquacious.Bookworm
2008-06-17
ch 6,
abuseHmm, to be honest. I liked it more than Loophole. The only thing though, is I enjoy reading slow paced stories so that I can become more attached to the characters and their relationship[you accomplished it so well in Fated!]. I feel as if the "almost"death scene was a little rushed, but that might just be because of the style you wrote Fated in. Well, good story and plotline. I only wished it were 100k+.

Keep on writing!
{^_^}
dillyx
2008-06-17
ch 6, anon.
abuseTHANK YOU FOR MAKING MY DAY!
I READ LOOPHOLE AND GENSHI. I LOVED IT AND NOW I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORIES. PLEASE KEEP IT UP, I REALLY APPRECIATE THEM.
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