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b
2010-01-04 . chapter 33
is it up yet...
Kate Poem /trouble with log/
2009-12-30 . chapter 33
I was not Obi's fan, but I am fan of Your story. Can You update "New Life"? Please?
as
2009-12-26 . chapter 1
You suck Kenobifan just as this story!
P053id0n
2009-12-17 . chapter 33
Hi!
I read all your story's and I really like them though "The Crossing Over" and "A new Life" are my Favorites!;) First of all I would like to thank you for writing them!
One thing I would like is if you would include a few more Jedi Knights, I mean I have read that quite a few survived "Order 66" and were later killed by Vader. Now since the Emperor didn't have a powerful apprentice for a while it would be possible that a few of them survived and they could come out of hiding after the emperor is dead and so a few reunions could take place at the end!;)
Thanks again for writing and I hope you update soon!
P053id0n
Dimac99
2009-12-14 . chapter 33
Oh no! What an evil place to stop! I do hope you manage to update soon because although I was enjoying this before, it's like you've kicked it in to overdrive these last couple of chapters and it's suddenly become really exciting. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next very much.
Chasing Liquor
2009-11-22 . chapter 33
It's been a while since I visited this story, but I'm glad I caught up. Generally, I lose a great deal of interest in stories that A) introduce new children and make them integral to the plot and B) stories that enter the Original Trilogy timeline.

However, I'm happy to report that I've lost no interest whatsoever. I think you've handled the shifts in time very well, and that Obi-Wan and Padme remain compelling in their middle-age. Sidious' and Obi-Wan's interaction has been one of the most interesting and entertaining elements of the story, and I'm looking forward to how this plot piece is resolved.

One very minor point: "It is" forms the contraction "it's," whereas the possessive would be "its." A very small mistake, but I thought I'd point it out.
Jedi totallyNsane
2009-11-21 . chapter 33
oh no! Obi-Wan's been captured! this is awesome, i love. really well done and interesting. great job, keep it up, and please update soon!
c
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
is it up yet??
Kate Poem
2009-11-07 . chapter 27
It must to be big surprise for Luke and Leia! And shock. Leia's emotions were similar for emotions of her "sperm donor" long time a go. Master Yoda explained her all story and everything is okay.
Did I say Your fan fic is very good earlier? /smile/
The talk between Luke and Obi Wan was heartcatching (I hope You'll understand it). Obi Wan is epitome of perfect parent.
Affectionate, understanding, caring etc. etc.
I did'nt and I don't like Padme's "faithfullness" to Anakin. It WAS a lie, not this omission.
Never mind. Good luck for all Your things and may the Muse be with You!
Kate Poem
2009-11-05 . chapter 7
Great chapter. Perfect Obi Wan always played fair. Master Yoda helped him to understand... he has his life to live. Anakin is dead. /It was good for him, perhaps. Twenty years of atrocities in black armor or quick, horrible death before that - I don't know... Stop, it is'nt time for ani-vation!/
Master Yoda was right. It is not hypocrisy. You know who is gone, Obi Wan and Padme love each other. I am sorry for Skywalker - maybe I should "listen" wise Jedi's words? /sigh/ I will try.
Guest
2009-11-04 . chapter 33
Oh please don't let Obi-Wan die, he just can't he didn't even talk to Padme, though given her past reactions it's easy to see why. Please don't kill Obi-Wan and are we going to find out about his blocked memories. Another great chapter, I can't wait to see the next one.
b
2009-10-26 . chapter 33
please please please keep on writing.
I pushed aside all my studies to read this beautiful story.
please please please make it worth it...lol
Kate Poem
2009-10-26 . chapter 33
By the Force! Cliffhanger... There Luke, here Obi Wan, crying Corde, poor Leia, worried Garen, Mon Mothma, Death Star...
Padme. I am worried - her children were right. She will be empty and unhappy without Obi Wan... /sigh/ I hope everything will be good: Emperor +, BETTER than Old New Republic, new BETTER Jedi Order, Yoda Head of New Council etc. etc.
And, of course happy life for Kenobi family.
I smiled for Rina's reaction and Han's thinking about General Kenobi. You are real Obi Wan Kenobi's fan! You can write about him in this way, everybody begin like him or love him more than earlier. It's amazing.
XxRandom NemesisxX
2009-10-25 . chapter 33
Awesome! I love this story, can't wait for the next update
hammelburg
2009-10-21 . chapter 33
Ahh! It's...too...SHORT! Please update quickly!
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