|Reviews for The fall will probably kill you|
| DD2 6/21/07 . chapter 20
Wonderful writing Please continue soon!
| Kikidevil17 6/20/07 . chapter 20
OMG! SO SAD! I cannot beleive that Kate is dead, that was so tragic on the election night! Great update, this twist is what makes the writting so good!
I enjoyed this line:
"She was an incredibly smart 50-year-old U.S. Senator from New York. Her running mate was a very charismatic black man who had run against her in the primaries but lost."
Becuase I notice you were doing a parody with Clinton/Obama. I am a big fan of Clinton so I was kind of happy when you said she won the primary. But obviously because Mac was in the general election, "Juila"" could not win, but my guess is that in the real 2008 election which does not invovle Mac, "Clinton" will win the election( I hope)!
Well great update!
| MKKH 6/20/07 . chapter 20
God Lara you keep killin' people! LOL!
Great job though! I really loved it! (It's so amazing to see my name in a fanfic I must say 'Katherine Mackenzie Allen')
Anyway.. "Another life is lost"
oh oh oh!
| nalaa 6/20/07 . chapter 20
You killed Kate! That was totally unexpected.
Why you continue trying to kill me with the "Next on The Fall"? lol I'm just anxious to read what happens...
I loved the update Lara, as always. Wonderful chapter :)
| Celticgirl84 6/10/07 . chapter 19
Great Chapter. I loved the Horace story line totally original. Greatjob
| 77517 6/7/07 . chapter 19
I find the Christine-Dickie love story to be hilarious! Bring it on. I can't wait to see where this goes.
"Dickie- oh, I know that feeling" - Ha!
Christine Chambers as Templeton's running mate? After he was so opposed to Mac's being VP/President?
This is absolutely hilarious: "And the Governor is a young, sexy woman. I mean… look at her…
Dickie was practically drooling over Christine’s picture." - It's so easy to parody Dickie.
"Dickie became red. He looked at Rod, who was staring at him with a frightening look." - Ha! Have I told you I love this chapter so far?
"Templeton’s going to use Christine’s youth and good health to make me look like a grandmother who needs an air tank just to give a speech." - Ha!
"Mac- do I also have to go to the pressroom and do some push-ups?" - Now this I'd like to see!
"You’ve slept with so many women that they could have their own state" - Ha! I love these lines you're shooting at us.
Dun, dun, dun, Mac finally finds out the truth about Horace.
"Mac- this isn’t dating. It’s called hit and run." - Good one, Mac.
I really didn't expect the sex scandal to be with Horace. I expected it to be with Jim and Jayne.
"You think I turned down a cabinet position because my ex boyfriend works for the president? Boy, you got some ego!" - Good one, Christine! This whole exchange with Dickie and Christine reminds me of Kevin and Julia in Speechless, when she wants to get out of that TV studio and he keeps trying to tell her why they'd be good together.
I can't believe Mac took Dickie back at all.
"Tony- a bomb exploded in a high school, in California. It was a terrorist attack." Are you serious? At this stage in the game?
I can't wait to see what the terrible event in the next chapter is!
| AnanaBBy 6/3/07 . chapter 19
I am amazed by the detail you put into the story...makes it real...
| Kikidevil17 6/2/07 . chapter 19
WOW this chapter was greatly written. You did a fantastic job with it. I love the Horace story very original and I loved how you connected to the pass. I alos like the fact that your brought Christine Chambers back, very interesting.
This was a really good chapter. I really enjoyed it!
Please write more!
| Misbehavin 6/2/07 . chapter 19
Great chapter. The "sexy" conversation between Mac and Dickie was priceless. I enjoyed the part between Mac and Horace where finally she quit treating him like a "Mamma's Boy." Of course, you can never have too many cute scenes with Rod and Mac. Can't wait to see how the election progresses.
| nalaa 6/2/07 . chapter 19
Thanks Lara for this wonderful update :)
I laughed so hard with Dickie and Mac, the "so… you are saying I am sexy?".
And, as always, I'm dying for read the next chapter.
Wonderful job :)
| clarkmk 5/9/07 . chapter 18
Enjoyed the last few chapters and reading about Mac and Rod's pasts. Finally Mac gets it and takes responsibility. Thanks for the reminder of how exquisite the dialogue was in that West Wing episode.
| mary j 5/8/07 . chapter 18
hey. When i firt started reading this I thought somebody was going to kill amy or something but this is really different. Go with it. I like it.
| Celticgirl84 5/8/07 . chapter 18
That was awsome, I loved the Rockenzie action in it
| DD2 5/7/07 . chapter 18
Oh man! i hope everything turns out okay. lol. great fic! Love the way you write! Continue soon!
| MKKH 5/7/07 . chapter 18
My favorite part.. is the end.. and the censure thing.. it's amazing!
I can't wait for the next chapter.. it will be amazing!