Cute. I liked it. i think you could work more of a stocatto poetic feel in it, especially with the moon bit of it, but if that's not your style then...

But yes, i liked it.

AW! That just made the breakup ten times worse.

~Tina101

wow, that was SO DAMN CUTE!

how cute! this is really great. adding it to favorites...which i really dont do often!

aww! so sad!

Aw
That was great!

Sad. But cute. Great job.

i liked it. short but to the point. it was cute

Aw, sad and cute at the same time. -huggles Mark plushie and then sets it down next to Maureen plushie- Great work.

Aww...poor Marky...that was so sweet! Its def. going under one of my favorites!

This is a darling story. I love how Mark tried to capture the moon for Maureen. A definate favorite.

Made me almost cry. Poor Marky! ;-;

Aw... that was SO sweet! I loved it!

aw

Aw, that was so sad... and harsh. That seemed a lot harsher than I imagined their breakup to be, I always thought it was the day after the breakup that Mark learned why, because that is always so much harder. But it was still very good.