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| Marielle 2007-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abusewoow I love your story I also love Eirika and Seth... they're so cute but he and his duty... :P |
| Haji is my home- boy 2007-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat is the cutest story ever! I luv it! I thought that it was very well- written and very descriptive! Seth and Eirika are so great in this! I don't know if you were planning to write more...but I really think you should...it was awesome!=] |
| Neonlights 2007-02-18 ch 1,  | abuseAW! kawai! cute! I love it! |
| piratelore 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this story. The flashbacks add a nice touch and help to carry on the story. I also like the title :P |
| flyingninjaassassin 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was AMAZING! |
| saffiremoon21 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abusesweet, and an interesting take... |
| Rexnos 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseYay! Another F duty fic! I get annoyed with all the, "I'm Kent and I can't love Lyn" and the "I'm Seth and Eirika is too good for me" fics. Stupid **... They make the rules, and thus, they can bend them Good fic. Nice and descriptive on the characters, in character, etc and so forth. I enjoyed reading it. Later, Rex |
| Lemurian-Girl 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseNice. It was a very well written piece. The flow of dialouge was natural, and I could picture the scenes very well in my head. However, I would reccomend putting some sort of separation between scene changes, as it is a bit confusing as it stands. And the end was a little corny, but its romance, and we all need our corny moments sometimes. :) Overall, a very sweet story. ~Lemurian-Girl~ |
| Sakura of the Gales 2006-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sniffs* It's so sweet...glomp! |
| BabyGurl278 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseWow that was really sweet. I really loved this one-shot so lovely. Eirika/Seth is one of my favorite pairings! I loved the ending too! I loved the line, Duty is a four letter word, but so is love! Beautiful. You should write more stories like these! Bravo! Keep up the good work! |
| BlueMechPencil 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseForde twitched not once but twice as Kyle woke him up using the ol’ “bucket of cold water” method, it was the eleventh time that Kyle did this and of what he saw he seemed to enjoy his screaming. “Seriously, man, what’s wrong with you?” -LOL! Meh, SethxEirika! Twas sweet but it would've been better if there was some sort label for the flash backs. When you jumped form the present to the flashback, it confused at what was happening at first but all and all, it's alright ^^. |