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Hawklan
2009-12-01 . chapter 5
Ch 4

nice letter from Sirius and I am looking forward to what Harry will do.

ch5

shopping...irrkkss... and unfriendly goblins :9
lemus
2009-11-30 . chapter 35
its a good chapter in which it starts to show the stress on harry and how he is
alexandra
2009-11-27 . chapter 35
FINISH THE STORY ALREADY!
Hawklan
2009-11-11 . chapter 2
Ch2

typical Dumbledore, I hope Harry will pull him a long nose...
Hawklan
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
hmm can't say much yet, because not much has happend in the first chapter so I think I will have to read a bit more :)
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore
2009-11-09 . chapter 1
I love this story. Please update soon.
Potterdownthestreet
2009-10-20 . chapter 35
I love this story update it soon would you please.
PhoenixiaPotter
2009-10-15 . chapter 35
Please don't give up! I really live this story!!
NorthernLights25
2009-10-12 . chapter 35
Please update soon
tcl7189
2009-09-26 . chapter 35
Really enjoying this story and watching the characters grow and mature together...can't wait for the next chapter...
DragonWolf82
2009-09-17 . chapter 35
This story for the most part I have enjoyed reading. This last chapter though I don't like so much. You made Harry too obsessed with training and dare I say it, Power. You have him focusing on training so much that he is neglecting his health when he should understand that if he is not taking care of his body then when the time comes to fight Moldyshorts he won't be able to be cause he is so exhausted that physically he won't be able to do anything. Also if Harry loves Hermione as much as you are saying then he would not be neglecting her as he is. After all what he is doing by neglecting her like this is allowing doubt to form in Hermiones mind about his love for her.
Nienna Tinehtele
2009-09-08 . chapter 35
This is a great story! I've been hooked since the first chapter :) Im definately loving it...I love that Harry is so independent and that he finally got out from under Dumbledore's thumb. And I definately like the connection between him and Hermione...I always thought they should end upt together in the books :) A great great story! Please update soon!
Moriko no Hikari
2009-09-04 . chapter 35
Poor Harry...I know what it's like to have your mind keep you awake.
ROBERT-19588
2009-08-26 . chapter 11
The fallowing are ideas I have, are not ment to tell anyone how to write their stories. I like characters that think, thats why I have the ideas that fallow:


Harry & Hermione need to quit Hogwarts and train on their own.


Harry needs to become emancipated.

Harry needs to goto Gringotts and have a look at his parant's Original will(s).

Harry needs to goto Gringotts and have a skills and heritage test run on him, as well check for any magical Blocks and tracking devices on him or his thangs.

-> Harry needs to see what skills he has that he does not know about.

-> Harry needs to see what other families he is relatd to, IE:
Arthur Pendragon, Godric Griffindor, Merlin, Etc.

-> Harry needs to see what blocks (on his magic or himself, any tracking
devices or spells on him.)

-> If Harry finds out he only related to the Potters, at least he checked.
Same goes for the Blocks and spells, if he finds none, at least he checked.

Harry needs to get all magical brethren to help him, as well as Harry helping them bring Peace to the World, and Equality between sentients.


Harry needs a list of all the business (both Magical and Non-Magical), properties, money, stocks, bonds, jewels, he owns.


As Harry is Lord Black, Harry needs to nulify both Narcissa Malfoy's, & Bellatrix LeStrange's marages, as well as disoen them from the Black family, as well as the getting the dowries returned to the Black family.


Before Harry goes back in time, he needs to have a Special Magical Trunk made, and he needs make sure his Special Magical Trunk is with him.


Harry should also be Lord Slytherin by conquest, as Harry defeated Thomas "Tom" Marvolo Riddle, Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort", by destoring Thomas "Tom" Marvolo Riddle's, Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort's" physical being as a child and again his (First, Second) year(s) at Hogwarts. Harry needs to cast "Thomas Marvolo Riddle, Jr." out of the Slytherin family foever.

Harry should by Lord Griffindor, as Harry pulled Lord Godric Griffindor's sword from the Sorting Hat.

As Harry is heir of at least two of the Hogwarts Founders (or should be), Harry owns Hogwarts, he needs to fire Dumbledore and not alow him to enter Hogarts ever again, as well as NOT allow anyone who has the Dark Mark to ever enter Hogwarts or any one who created the Dark Mark to ever enter Hogwarts!

Albus Dumbledore as well as Minerva McGonagall and Hagrid (Minerva McGonagall did not stop Dumbledore from Harry going to the Dudleys, as well as kidnapping Harry, and Hagrid brought Harry to the Dudleys) needs to made to do HARD labor, without using his Magic in the Goblin mines till they DIE, for putting Harry with the Dudleys, as well as, if ilegial blocks and or spells were put on Harry by Dumbledore, as well as the Dudleys to goto prison for what they did to Harry.

EVERYTHANG that Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall, the Dudleys have need to be given to Harry.

-> Hagrid just needs a good warning about what he did to Harry on Dumbledore's
orders as Hagrid is a smiple trusting person.

-> Albus Dumbledore put Harry with the Dudleys, so Albus Dumbledore is
just as responble as the Dudleys for how Harry was treated by the
Dudleys, as Albus Dumbledore was an accessory to how Harry was
treated by the Dudleys.

Fawkes needs to unbond with DumbleDORK and bond to Harry, for what DumbleDORK has done to Harry and others.


In the Harry Potter and mostly in the Fan Fics Dumbledore never gets in trubble for what he allowed Harry to go through at the Dudleys or at Hogwarts.


Snape needs to goto Azkaban for all the thangs he has done to Harry and his family.


-> Snape over haeard the prophecy and repoted it to Voldemort,
thus puttig Harry and his fmily in danger.
ROBERT-19588
2009-08-26 . chapter 10
Why did Harry not call Dobby or one of the other House-Elfs to help him?
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