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too lazy to log in 2008-07-05 ch 20, anon.	abuseThere was a discrepancy in this chapter: Earlier it was 'Remus TRISTAN Lupin' and now it's 'Remus JOHN Lupin'. What happened?
Your Unknown Friend 2008-07-03 ch 34,	abusegreat chapter. Hope you update soon!
Dria-Chan a.k.a XxXxMuSiCxX... 2008-06-30 ch 34,	abuseHello! I love your story! hehe it kicks butt!! i can't wait until you update! It is one of the BEST Harry Potter stories I've read!!
Shran 2008-06-30 ch 34,	abuseA new angle on the Harry Hermione relationship (definitely my fav ship), I really like it. Heartwarming and slightly addictive I find myself eagerly anticipating your next update, I cant wait to see where you take us next. I love the inclusion of shared grief being the catalyst for bringing Hermione, Harry and Cattie together as a family. Your portrayal of their developing feelings was very believable. I've always believed the greatest relationships grow out of friendship, it certainly held true for my wife and I. - Q for you, will Harry be a Horcrux? I hope not as personally I always found that to be very implausible in the Cannon, after all if it was that easy to make a horcrux accidentally there would be hundreds of immortal murderers out there causing havoc.
Tombadgerlock 2008-06-23 ch 7,	abusei am confused. How come hermione knows "no one knows where he is" if she had no contact with the order?
Tombadgerlock 2008-06-22 ch 6,	abusethis chapter was abit rough around the edges, and this is a hermione fanboy talking (me :D). Good work.
Back in Black 2008-06-21 ch 9, anon.	abuse“You shouldn’t do that you know.” He gave her a confused look. “What?” “Dazzle people like that!” if anything he was even more confused. “Dazzle? What do you mean?” she gave a long suffering sigh and put her menu down, folding her arms over it. “Look what you did to the poor girl! One smile and she could barely walk.” He blushed and scratched the back of his head. “I dazzle people?” “Girls mostly” she mumbled and picked her menu back up. A grin slowly filled his face, he leaned forward on one elbow. “Do I dazzle you?” she looked from behind the menu, heat filling her face. She was saved from having to answer when Elizabeth returned. From behind her you could see two more waitresses leaning from behind the counter looking in their direction. “Are you ready to order.” She was looking only at Harry. Hermione raised an eyebrow at him and jerked her head in the direction of the other girls. Choosing to ignore her Harry turned to Elizabeth. “Yes, I’d like some French toast, please.” He said handing her his menu. Hermione put her menu down. “And I’d like a cinnamon roll.” The girl glanced in her direction and picked up her menu off the table. “Alright, I’ll be right back with your order.” Giving Harry another smile she once again stumbled away. Hermione gave him a triumphant look. “See?” he waved his hand dismissively and smirked at her. “You never answered my question.” She tried to look nonchalant. “What question?” “Do I dazzle you?” she colored slightly and looked away, sipping her juice. “Frequently.” I totally recognize these lines from Twilight. I loved that book. I seriously smiled when I saw these lines. :D
happyhewlett 2008-06-17 ch 18,	abusei loved this chapter as well as the 17 previous but what song was it harry was singing to cattie
rissapotter32 2008-06-17 ch 34,	abuseOkay, I have spent like, a long time reading this story so far, and you know what? By far my favorite! I love the plot and everything about it! Though, the horcruxes I am not quite used too...at least how they were destroyed. I do keep waiting for Harry and Hermione to invite Ron to move in with them though! I feel so bad for him and it seems like the home is too empty! He also should be learning what they're learning too and shouldn't be locked up with old Dumbles. Just my opinion though! Anyways, I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. And, peice of advice, don't try to rush your chapters. I've noticed how many reveiws you probably get on telling you to update soon, so, just finish your chapter so that it's the best. And you know what they say, the best work is the one worth waiting for! Keep it up!
mundi 2008-06-16 ch 34,	abuseGood story I just finished reading it and I like it really like it so update soon I want to know what is going to happen next see ya.
scotty26 2008-06-07 ch 34,	abusewell i can say that the last couple of chapters have been a vast improvement over the other ones. not saying the previous chapter were bad. well..this is getting interesting
scotty26 2008-06-04 ch 22,	abuseeven though i havent finish the story or read up to the last chapter i felt i had to leave you a review before i headed to bed myself and say this has been one insightful story because of the effort you put in writting the "details" per se of the place they act and how the characters behave and such if that made any amount of sense..since i cant find the word im looking for @ the moment. the first few chapters i was actually picturing them doing the things that they were doing..they were extremely "detail" which is not a bad thing..its a great thing..actually i almost felt like i was watching a tv show or movie you know?...well anywys gotta go...cant wait to catch up and what mischief you put them through.
fraewyn 2008-06-04 ch 34,	abuseYay! off to see the new family! cant wait for more!
happy-reader007 2008-06-01 ch 34,	abuseI LOVe your story. Cattie is really cool and i think making ron and a bigger part was a brilliant idea. can't wait for an update. happy-reader-007
Shadow King77 2008-05-25 ch 4,	abusei dont normally review stories in the middle of it but i felt that i had to tell you that i really liked sirius' letter. i have read so many stories like this, and for once, it actually sounded like sirius wrote it. kudos to you. =]

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