Albus Dumbleore's head...I rather like it there, actually. I like that list...Tom, Minerva, darling Snape (I like the speculation meeting setout there, nice picture) and, of course, the Potters.
You write well, very in character for Dumbledore's thoughts, and the concept (loosely) of Dumbledore's own saving-people-thing...*mimes doing that French things where they kiss thier own fingertips and go 'm-wah!'*
Good story. Very good.

Nice! Interesting perspective. Ooh, and I especially liked: "But Minerva was another regret, a regret of promising things left discarded."

Might we see something more on that aspect in the future? ;-)

Your mastery of the English Language is as always superb, ravenhaired.

I do believe you've caught sweet little Albus pretty well... I do imagine he must sometimes sit and reflect over awful things that have happened.. just as you wrote it!

Very angsty. Poor Albus...he has had a rough time of it, hasn't he?

*grins*

Minerva seems to have traces of Elphaba in her.

A good look into Albus' head.