constructive feedback, constructive feedback, constructive feedback, constructive feedback. there you go that should cover.


this is really good. keep going!

I really enjoyed this! lol Keep up the good work.

this is a great story keep going!!

LOVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW ALL OF THIS PLAYS OUT!

I like you're writing style and some parts are really funny
it's a good story line
I love it
please update soon
:)

'This is the twenty-first century, Okada. No one, and I mean no one, stays a virgin past freshman year of college.'

... I feel so special for making that statement a lie.

You know, I rather like how this plot is progressing. Great chapter and I look foward to the next one!

This is great,i like it.Update soon.^_^

Great prologue i like it:)

heres #2 of the reviews!So far it's good write nore!!

lol threatening people with the review numbers? That's ok, I'm kidding around. I really love this story, I mean I've been looking for something really exciting and so far this is it. Can't wait for the next chapter =)